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- Hello SkittleDittleMan!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structures.
- Your structures are lacking depth and detail. Try using stairs/slabs to add more detail to teh walls and push your walls in so u can effectively add the detailing and depth. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for a physical explanation. The palette for the roofs are a little weird and dont really compliment each other well. Your stairway doesnt really look appealing since its perfectly going down a hill and the supports dont seem ideal.
- You tree are nice especially since they're custom made, but try to make them bigger. Also add some roots/branches for a more realistic effcect. You could also add apples onto them by getting a steve head and doing ./skull MHF_Apple.
- Your terrain is pretty flat and more blocks should be added to your mountain so it looks more natural. I like how you tried to add variation by adding green clay to the terrain.Maybe take it a step further and add another block such as cobblestone.
- I think your plot needs some more effort and work added before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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