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- Novice Review:
- Very unique plot, and i do really like it, but theres some stuff you should take in to account before ranking up!
- The tracks are good, but theres only one problem! MINECARTS! On so many tracks, theres bound to be one or two minecarts rollin on by, so try and add a few of those!
- As your plot is more of an industrialized plot, i wanna see more industrialization! So: smokestacks, barrels, giant furnaces, pipes, conveyor belts maybe, possibly even a factory where the terrain is! Really fill the plot, but try not to have it be too messy!
- Thats pretty much it from me!
- Good luck!
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