[41]
she seems to no longer mind making contact with her ordinarily.
she seems to no longer minded making contact with her ordinarily.

[44]
In that case, please give some thought as to what you'd like to do from here during that time, Ravi.
In that case, please give some thoughts as to what you'd like to do during that time, Ravi.

[47]
I finally made a friend, after all...
She finally made a friend, after all...
(I wanted to double check if it was supposed to be I or She but stella was offline)

[49]
It'd be nice if there was some magical tool that could protect Ravi in my absense.
It'd be nice if there was some magical tool that could protect Ravi in my absence.