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  1. backstory; ghost does something and friends end up pushing the girl off the cliff
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  3. ghost kind of drives people away from the area
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  5. individual characters;
  6. josh just likes camping, cousins with sophie
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  8. sophie heard of a rumor at school about the woods being haunted, started the idea, is josh's cousin. likes to be around people.
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  10. christina is the only one who looked into the urban legend and knows the whole story
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  12. victoria is next door neighbors and really good friends with sam, but nothing more. aquaintences with erin as a result of sam. likes pastels on the walls.
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  14. sam is next door neighbor of victoria, not interested in erin. considers victoria to be a sister, nothing more. likes social media.
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  16. erin has a huge crush on sam, aquaintences with victoria but doesn't like that she's so close to sam. best friends with norah. fashionable.
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  18. kaitlyn, best friends with jess. likes to get on people's nerves
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  20. jessica, best friends with kaitlyn. practically fearless.
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  22. norah's closest friend in the group is erin, followed by sophie. really nice, but has a fragile ego. likes to make people happy.
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  24. plot;
  25. sophie hears of urban legend from christina and christina's friends in school
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  27. sophie likes the idea of going there as a test of courage, asks people to go. gets josh involved because josh knows the woods
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  29. everyone meets up at sophie's, josh drives everyone to the woods? (could be sam and josh, to show people starting to show alliegences)
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  31. make it there with no problems. some small things are off when they arrive, like someone staring blankly into space in the parking lot and some worn out police tape
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  33. sophie reminds people of the story of the woods? could be christina
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  35. sophie gets excited, josh/jess don't care, sam/erin/victoria get kind of creeped out by christina, norah gets scared. kaitlyn starts making fun of norah, lightly
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  37. [at this point the story starts going in two different ways. the first is the erin/sam/victoria arc, the second is everyone else]
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  39. sam, victoria, josh, kaitlyn, jessica go collect wood/norah, sophie, erin, kaitlyn, christina at camp setting up the tents and stuff.
  40. showcases victoria/sam's frienship, goes into how josh is an outsider kinda/kaitlyn and christina fail to set up some of the tents while norah talks about sam with erin (sophie could be a part of this? she could also be helping/failing to set up a tent)
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  42. join back together, josh starts fire. victoria/erin sit really close to sam. (here would be a good place to have sam and victoria to go on a walk alone) dusk gets closer, christina tells story and freaks people out even more.
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  44. [night hits]
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  46. things in the background start to escalate. branches start breaking in the background, etc.
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  48. kaitlyn and jessica ramp up the tension by faking things to scare norah. it's shown that erin could have stepped in but didn't to follow sam. norah leaves/erin learns that sam is going away to college or something and she confesses, but he rejects her
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  50. erin and norah meet at a cliff, ghost causes death of erin
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  52. [next day]
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  54. (black screen, voices calling out for erin)
  55. (they find her)
  56. (scene just showing the people around her body, ghost behind them)
  57. creepy music plays, the end
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