Tayter_Kat

JelloMan21

Aug 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello there JelloMan21, this is you Novice review...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to market stalls. You have a very nice house with a good amount of depth. Great job here!!!
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees. Your trees are good enough to rank !!! Great job. One thing id keep in mind is that the trees leaves resemble spheres. If you add branches to the trunk, then add leaves from there, it might help fix that. Make sure the leaves are not just sticking to the branches. They can be 1-2 blocks away and still look realistic.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like caves, hills, and cliffs. You have some great terrain!!!! One thing I would fix is that your plot is very empty overall. To fix the emptiness, you can add some small structures, more interesting terrain like rock formations or craters, trees, lakes, bushes, waterfalls, etc. The list almost never ends. Just be creative and you will figure it out.
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  10. Fix the things mentioned above and your good to go!! good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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