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- Hello CrazzyPanda_!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today! Lets start of with your structure.
- Your ship needs some more detailing and the back is too flat. I won't blame you for the flat back that much because of your plot boundaries. Try to use stairs/slabs to add more detail and color to the main body. I like how you added wings making this ship special :D
- You have no organics on your plot which is an essential part. Maybe you could add angels to your plot. It's hard to add organics since your ship is suppose to be in the air no where near the ground.
- Your terrain is pretty weird and has an unusual block palette. Try to smooth it down, and maybe you could add clouds in the air.
- Try to work on your plot especially your terrain. Show some more effort and detail and maybe you'll get ranked up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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