/u/ GL Webtoon: Just Right There Ch. 1

Just Right There Ch. 1
(btw, no intention of stepping on the toes of the original translator, i just felt that if i thought i could do better i should prove it to myself instead of just thinking it)
(also most of the sfx i'm not sure about because i'm a filthy gyopo)
(seriously, i can't into sexy sfx)

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>Doyeon-ssi, you up yet?

>Starting from today... for every one lesson
>We'll do two circles

>!!!!
>What?!

>Wha-what did you say?
>[Min Do-yeon]

>You heard me, two circles.
>[I Rae-ni (“Leni”)]

>What are you even saying? What kind of idea is that?
>Says who?!

>Says me~? <3
**this short exchange isn't a literal translation but i think it's better in english this way

>Stop kidding with me!
>Oh, but I'm not kidding~~

>Ugh, no way..! Don't get caught up in her stride, gotta keep it together.
**i was actually really confused by this sentence and i'm not confident in that translation

>As you know, this breaks the terms of our agreement. So you can't.

>Furthermore, certain terms of that agreement cannot be changed without a special discussion, no matter how much you think you can do whatever you want. Get it?
**also not confident in this translation

>.....Leni, are you listening?

>So if we do this 'discussion', then you'll do it.

>Really... won't you help me out?

>If you give me two circles...
>Then from here on out, whenever we have a lesson...
>I can make it even more amazing for you, no?

>!!!!

>Ugh.. ah..//
>It... It's a trick! Calm down...calm-

>@$#$%^^!!!!

>Pfft, see? Doyeon-ssi, you actually want it too.
>...

>You gonna help me out in the end, but you're still playing dumb~

>I... haven't said a thing yet...

>Ha... is this woman really going to stay in my house forever, or what?

>Then ~ seems like the discussion is over
>From now on… For one lesson – two circles.

>I'm gonna hafta write it downnnn~~

>Ah!

>Write it down right here…

>...

>...If it's going to be like this, we're gonna have problems…

>I *am* s-sorry, but
>...on that promised day,
>Get out.

>...

>Up until now,
>even with just the lessons, you thoroughly helped me. A-appreciate it.
**last sentence is literally: “thankfully think.” it's probably 'I think' (there are no pronouns, as usual), but imho it could be read as a faintly condescending/distant 'You should think of it thankfully' if doyeon said it a certain way

>I mean it.
>What.. anyway, now there's nothing to learn anymore...

>You are saying you have nothing left to learn?
**blue's sentence doesn't quite finish and pink kinda finishes it but i just couldn't figure out a way to mimic this in english

>Huh? N-no
>What I was saying… it's because, that...

>It's only been the introduction up through now, so what are you even saying?

>Huh?
>Wha...what more...?

>W-wait a second! What're you doing… we're gonna do it he-here??

>Let's just say this is an outdoors lesson

>Wait, wait!! I-I'm not ready yet, I'm not...

>I'm gonna go slowly, so don't you worry.

>Now, shall we..
>do some studying together?
**not completely literal but it sounds much better like this. 'do some reviewing' doesn't sound nearly as smooth

>Unnn..//

>Right...now, it's morning isn't it, it's too bright...

>!!!~~

>S-stop...
>I told you, it's too bright right now! La-later...

>Hnnng..!!///

>T-this can't be happening...

>Haaah... haaah... hnng...

>>두근 두근 is sfx for heartbeats, i think ('du-geon, du-geon')

>If you really want me to stop, you know I told you to say, 'I hate it.'

>Go ahead and say it. Don't you like this..?

>Huhh..n-no, I can't calm down...

>If I'm speaking honestly, you know that I'm going to reward you, right?

>No.. that.. I don't hate that, but...

>But..?

>B-but.. like this, right now..

>Or instead, if you lie, I'll punish you.

>Ah..!!

>Unn.. ah! Haaa..nnnggh!

>Deoyeon-ssi, you know you get really turned on when I do that to your ear?
not sure about this translation, i can't into sexy talk

>Huuu..//
>Haaah..
>Aaahh

>Ah, ah.. right now.. I don't know either...

>...///
>Nnngh
>Ah, ah..!
>Haa.. uuhhn...!
>Nnnngg..! I-if you keep...
>Doing that there...

>Aaah-nnnghhh...!
>N-no.. stop...!!

>Haaah-nnnghh!
>Ahh!
>Haa..!!
>Haaa.. nngg..!!
>Ahh... uuhnnn..!

>!!!!!
>Wh-what are you doing...?!!

>Today, we're moving on to the next lesson.

>What? Y-you can't! Stop..!!

>Ahh!!!!

>!!!!??

>W-wait..!!
>No!
>S-stop.. huhhhnnnggg...!

>Move your hand out of the way.

>You're not gonna let me go over this lesson?
lit. are you not going to receive the lesson

>...!!!~~

>How...did it even happen this way..?!