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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some things you should work on before you rank up,
- The terrain is okay, but try to shape it better and give it more levels and layers. Smooth it out in some places, and rough it up in some as well. The aim is to have a nice, even terrain.
- The palette of the terrain (the blocks used in it) seems a little too messy at the moment. Try to pick blocks that work better together and are more similar in color. That way your terrain seems nice and even!
- The organics on the plot are okay, but theyre all the same size. Try to have some of them bigger and maybe even some smaller. Also try to make more of them around the plot.
- Your structure needs to be bigger. Add on to it and fill up the plot more with structures. Your detailing is okay, but it needs some work. Use stairs, slabs, fences, walls or even buttons to detail your builds appropriately. Be careful of over detailing though. Over detailing can make your build look messy. You need to work on depth as well. Add more layers to the build, giving it a sense of depth and deepness.
- One last thing to note. Theres a ton of empty space on the plot that needs to be filled. Weather it be with structure, more terrain or organics, it needs to be filled.
- Good luck
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