AlexandrosG Plot Review

Hi AlexandrosG!

My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I could already see that your plot doesn't follow a specific theme and everything doesn't flow smoothly. Lets start by talking about your structures.

You have two different structures that don't really have the same palette. They are both lacking detail and depth. If you need help with these, refer to ./warp depthtutorial. Try pushing in the walls and layering different blocks for depth. The sphere room on top of your structure doesn't really seem pleasing to the eye especially being made of leaves. Your bridge needs some work and the sea lanterns don't fit with the wood. The random white sphere in the sky is not necessary to the actual plot.

Your trees are all different and again doesn't follow a specific theme. They seem like random trees that seemed necessary to plop down on your plot. For your trees, try adding branches, roots, and air holes for a realistic effect. Your statue is more of a player statue than an organics statue. Organics statue are more realistic and don't have anything to do with players. They would be like really statues you see in everyday life like the statue of liberty, etc.

Your terrain transitions from mycelium to grass which is weird and awkward. Your hills need some more smoothing and you river needs smoothing aswell. I like how instead of just grass, you used clay to add detail to it.

Overall, I think your need to improve and change your plot drastically. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D