xDraghun

zmanx252 Plot Review

Jul 28th, 2015
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  1. Hello zmanx252!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and i will be reviewing your plot today. Let's start off with your structure.
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  5. Your structure is lacking depth and detail. It's also pretty small for the amount of space you still have on your plot. Try adding stairs/slabs for detailing and push the walls in. ./warp depthtutorial for reference. U could also try making another structure for a better chance of ranking.
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  7. Your trees look similiar to bonemealed trees, which are shamed upon. Remove them and try making custom trees. Dont forget to add the branches/roots.
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  9. Your terrain is pretty flat and lifeless. Try changing the bottom of the pond to sand/sandstone and adding flowers/sugar cane around the pond for a more detailed look. It's a little weird how one hill is stone and the other one is grass. You should stick with one so there is a sense balance. Also try adding more blocks to ur terrain such as green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel, etc for variation and color.
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  11. You could still put some more effort into your plot. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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