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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot so far, but theres some stuff you should work on before ranking up!
- The general terrain is okay, but try to be a bit more creative with it, instead of making it just a hill! The cloud is a creative idea indeed, but its a bit too rough. Try to make the clouds flow better, and have the terrain a bit smoother in some places, and a bit more roughed up in others. The aim, is to have nice, even terrain :)
- Also, try to have a palette that is consistent for your terrain. The lime wool and mycelium dont match all too well, so try to go with blocks that match and that should make your terrain smoother!
- Your structures are okay, but they dont have a lot of detailing or depth to them. Try to detail your structures appropriately with stairs, slabs, fences or even buttons. Be careful of over detailing though. That can lead to your structures looking messy and uncoordinated.
- Add more layers to your structures, to give your build a sense of depth and deepness.
- Your organics are alright, but theyre mainly all the same size and shape. Try to add more variation to your trees by making them different sizes and shapes.
- Also, theres a ton of empty space on your plot that should be filled, so keep that in mind.
- Good luck!
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