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Jachra

WH Dark Heresy

Oct 22nd, 2017
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  1. [4:35 PM] Solana: I had an actually good warhammer idea
  2. [4:35 PM] Solana: yawns.
  3. [4:36 PM] Jachra: Oh?
  4. [4:37 PM] Solana: Story centers around a single Adeptus Sororitas, or a group, most of them specializing in Geneology and medicine. In short, it is their duty to the Imperium that they protect the purity of noble bloodlines within the empire.
  5. [4:37 PM] Solana: The main player/character (I could never waste my time writing a Warhammer fanfic) has some psychic ability that allows her to connect with past events in any given location.
  6. [4:38 PM] Solana: It would be a bit of a 'mystery' With high ranking officials and nobles being murdered in grizzly ways, and it's becoming increasingly obvious that demons are involved, because Tzneetch trappings are sometimes present.
  7. [4:39 PM] Solana: The 'culprit' is a woman who was born a boy in the slums of that planet's society. For her, life was agony.
  8. [4:39 PM] Solana: But she also had psychic potential, and her resolve to never give up - her hope - connected her to Tzneetch, who sent a greater demon to her.
  9. [4:40 PM] Solana: This demon made her a fully functional woman, and tricked a noble man into marrying her, so she would be one of the most powerful nobles on the planet.
  10. [4:40 PM] Solana: Each time the main sister of battle investigates one of the dead nobles, her mind 'brushes' the noble woman's, and she learns a little more about her past, what she's trying to hide, and ultimately, who she is.
  11. [4:41 PM] Solana: It turns out, a decade or so after being elevated to nobility, she's become pregnant, except her husband died in an 'accident'. So she knows immediately that her baby is not human. She also doesn't care. She doesn't care that she became pregnant without warning, and she doesn't care that she's developing claws and scales that she now has to cover up.
  12. [4:41 PM] Solana: Because to her, life wasn't worth living until Tzneetch became a part of hers.
  13. [4:42 PM] Jachra: :<
  14. Poor thing
  15.  
  16. This is a really interesting idea, by the by
  17. [4:42 PM] Solana: So she is doing everything in her power to keep her baby safe, and to prepare the planet for an eternity under its benevolent guidance.
  18. [4:42 PM] Solana: The main sister of battle also has a kind of mother/daughter relationship with a living saint who is stationed on that planet
  19. [4:43 PM] Solana: And the member of the church who is in charge of the Sisters of Battle on that world is also a Greater Demon of Tzneetch
  20. [4:43 PM] Solana: who is basically Hazama
  21. [4:43 PM] Solana: and keeps working to thwart the investigation by making 'bad decisions'(edited)
  22. [4:43 PM] Jachra: is it the same one who changed/impregnated the antagonist?(edited)
  23. [4:43 PM] Solana: It's the same one, though he didn't impregnate her.
  24. [4:44 PM] Solana: She became pregnant by the warp as an accident when casting some spell.
  25. [4:44 PM] Jachra: oh, well enough~
  26. [4:44 PM] Solana: But the demons of Tzneetch are still 'very' interested in it.
  27. [4:44 PM] Jachra: aye
  28. [4:44 PM] Solana: He's not the one who impregnated her, because he's in love with someone else.
  29. [4:44 PM] Solana: The living saint.
  30. [4:45 PM] Solana: One of the final scenes would be the character's 'group' storming a manor twisted by the warped, filled with demons and cultists, with the officer at their head, joking about how: "You know, it's a serious offense to disobey one of my orders; I mean it's basically treason~"
  31. [4:45 PM] Jachra: *nestles*
  32. Home, by the by
  33.  
  34. Ahahaha :D
  35. [4:45 PM] Solana: And then the living saint shows up and stabs him in the back. Which he wasn't expecting, because the Living Saint is ACTUALLY protecting the mother as well.
  36. [4:46 PM] Jachra: goodness
  37. [4:46 PM] Jachra: why's that?
  38. [4:46 PM] Solana: The smokescreen he was going to use is that it's not their job or whatever, and he's already summoned the nearby space wolves
  39. [4:46 PM] Solana: so their job is to defend the church.
  40. [4:46 PM] Solana: Except there was never any indication that the space wolves would make it in time, so the character rallies the other sisters in defiance.
  41. [4:47 PM] Solana: The saint's wings, when she shows up in her full glory, are dragon wings.
  42. [4:47 PM] Solana: And the greater daemon is so surprised by her treachery, it just makes him love her more, and he dies before he can finish calling her name, and saying he loves her.
  43. [4:48 PM] Solana: She turns on him because it was his intention to steal the woman's baby from her and raise it to suit his own designs, because Tzneetch.
  44. [4:48 PM] Solana: As for why she's working for the woman, she feels robbed because she never got to be a mother, and she's been suffering doubts for many decades now. She's lived hundreds of years
  45. [4:48 PM] Solana: And then one day, she realized - her doubts hadn't diminished her in the slightest.
  46. [4:48 PM] Solana: She still had her divinity, she was still immortal.
  47. [4:49 PM] Solana: So her immortality came from her faith not the God Emperor.
  48. [4:49 PM] Solana: And if her power didn't come from the Emperor of Man, then everything else the church had said was a lie, too.
  49. [4:49 PM] Jachra: so she's decided to adopt the woman as a positive daemon
  50. [4:49 PM] Solana: The way women are inferior to men, the focus on the space marines as the emperor's chosen, all of it
  51. [4:49 PM] Jachra: yeah
  52. [4:49 PM] Solana: just some human's way of twisting an ancient past to suit their own agenda.
  53. [4:49 PM] Solana: At least Tzneetch is 'honest' about what he is. At least he's real.
  54. [4:50 PM] Solana: And through him, she can finally break through that wall she's been hitting with her own progress.
  55. [4:50 PM] Solana: 'cause she wants to be a dragon, and have the planet be entirely dragons.
  56. [4:50 PM] Jachra: What happens then?
  57. [4:50 PM] Solana: I haven't decided on if the main character kills the woman and her baby or not, I suppose because in my head it was always 'a game'
  58. [4:51 PM] Jachra: then the Sister of Battle is like "I would like to be a dragon also?"(edited)
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