Jewsef

Smile_Games's review

Jun 19th, 2015
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  1. Hey this is Jewsef and I'll be reviewing your plot.
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  3. Alright for your terrain I'd like to see more than just grass used there and maybe u should add like a small lake/pond etc...
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  5. For the Organics ( trees in your case ) right now they just look like sticks with leaves on them, make them a bit bigger and add some branches and make them curvy add some roots and then finish it with leaves on them. You really need to improve your trees to get a rank up.
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  7. For the structure you did, the roof is too simplistic and the walls need more depth and detail.
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  9. Hope this helps and good luck!
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  11. ~Regards, Jewsef.
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