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  1. Note :
  2. [...] number of panel top to bot right to left. the word bubble also follow same pattern, unless specific in note.
  3. <...> my comment and reference.
  4. {...} effect and word that not in bubble. Putting in an effect text or not is left to the editor to decide. If there are a lots I will translated only an important one, or one that can help clarify action. If not much I'll try translated all.
  5.  
  6. -----
  7.  
  8. Troubling Silly Question of ShinBudTao <The title have the same spelling with SoPM, but with different kanji, thus the different meaning. I changed Tough > Troubling. The rest is the first character of Shinto Buddhist Taoist / Using full name or not is up to editor then.>
  9.  
  10.  
  11. p4
  12.  
  13. And so, here's the exceptional preface. I'm Hiyori who's in charge of drawing. Hi Hi. <Changed the first sentence>
  14.  
  15. It's good that I bought Symposium of Post-mysticism on the first day of sale but I'm very busy,
  16. It looks like I no choice but to read it little by little at a time~,
  17. or that's what I thought.
  18. When I started reading, it's so interesting, that when I noticed, I already reached the final page in no time.
  19. So I wrote this with that amazement.
  20. I'll be happy if you enjoy reading it!
  21. Byakuren is lovely and pitifully cute. <It can also mean "Byakuren is to be loved and compassionate, so cute", but I guess it's better as is.>
  22. Now then-.
  23. <Changed some parts a bit>
  24.  
  25.  
  26. p5 <this page script is from wiki>
  27.  
  28. [2]
  29. Reimu : Before I blow my lid!
  30. {Slam} <add door SFX>
  31.  
  32.  
  33. p6
  34. [2]
  35. Miko : but it was an extremely interesting meeting. {Satisfied}
  36. <Changed to satisfied>
  37.  
  38. [3]
  39. Miko : I get to have a more clear grasp about humans who live in Gensokyo
  40. : and come to know the power relationships of this world too.
  41. <Changed to "more">
  42.  
  43. [4]
  44. Miko : The one that should be especially looked out for are the gods of Moriya shrine.
  45. : They wield a controlling influence in Gensokyo more than I imagined.
  46. <Changed to past tense>
  47.  
  48. p7
  49. [1]
  50. Miko : Religion is a thing like fever.
  51. : If peoples get inflame to stir up, this world will get remold to what the gods desired.
  52. <changed to "gods desired">
  53.  
  54. [5]
  55. Kanako : Shoutoku Taishi is a dangerous existence. <or Prince Shoutoku/ refer to Miko>
  56. : The effects she can give toward our faith is incalculable.
  57. <changed a bit. Though keeping it as "religion" wouldn't matter much>
  58.  
  59. p8
  60. [1]
  61. Kanako : The real threat are Byakuren Hijiri and Shou Toramaru.
  62. : Their existence will surely attract religious people......
  63. <changed to people>
  64.  
  65. [3]
  66. Kanako : In the near future, there is a high possibility that she will become the greatest obstacle.
  67. : If I'm not carefully paying attention to her from now on......
  68. <changed barrier > obstacle>
  69.  
  70. [4]
  71. Byakuren : Today's meeting was fruitful! {Heart warming} <Well actually it's sort of soft and warming>
  72. <Added "!">
  73.  
  74.  
  75. p9
  76. [1]
  77. Byakuren : It's somewhat regrettable that we couldn't talk throughout the night as scheduled.
  78. : It will be nice if we have an opportunity to meet like this again.
  79. <Fixed typo>
  80.  
  81. [2]
  82. {Gasp!}
  83. Byakuren : Come to think of it, when I leave, Shou asked me......
  84. <Even though there's no "ask", it's okay to add it since we know the context. Or you can just leave it as "..., Shou...">
  85.  
  86. [4]
  87. {Packed}
  88. Byakuren : This is troublesome, if I don't hurry perhaps I won't be able to buy everything today......
  89. <changed the SFX and "not" to "don't">
  90.  
  91. [5]
  92. Byakuren : If it turns out like this......
  93. {unravel}
  94. <"turn > turns">
  95.  
  96. p10
  97. [1]
  98. Miko : But really,
  99. <added really>
  100.  
  101. [2]
  102. Miko : that corrupt priest's confused look was unexpected.
  103. {Byakuren : Eh? x2}
  104. {He heh} <Miko's snickering>
  105. : It's worth going to that place just for that.
  106. <fixed typo and added SFX>
  107.  
  108. [4]
  109. Miko : Though only for a short time, it's true that my seal got prolonged by her.
  110. : If she is just a corrupt priest, she shouldn't be able to do such feat. <Changed a bit>
  111.  
  112. [5]
  113. Miko : If I let down my guard, it will be like the time I sleep 1400 years ago......
  114. {White letter : Baaaam}
  115. {right of mausoleum : Oh, huh? left : What happen-!?}
  116. {miko head : pissed}
  117. <Changed to I sleep. She's talking about the time she got sealed>
  118.  
  119. [6]
  120. Miko : Seems like she uses physical body enhancing technique.
  121. <Fixed the sentence>
  122.  
  123.  
  124. p11
  125. [1]
  126. Miko : Perhaps, I need to look into it further......
  127.  
  128. {Haaa-}
  129. Byakuren : Somehow, I managed to carry out Shou's request, but...... <Changed "this" to "it" and managed>
  130.  
  131. [2]
  132. Tenko : I heard there is a legendary matsutake here, the "CharisMatsutake". <It's a mix of Charisma and Matsutake. If you guys don't get it, from the seller's dialog, it's probably his d**k>
  133. : Hurry up and bring it out.
  134.  
  135. Shop : ......Hmm, to think a person who know that name would appear.
  136. <Changed a bit, though you're free to keep it or not>
  137.  
  138. [3]
  139. Shop : Alright, I'll show you all of my-
  140. <sign : Tomato the small letter : fresh>
  141. <Add I'll show you>
  142.  
  143. [4]
  144. {Startled}
  145.  
  146.  
  147. p12
  148.  
  149. [2]
  150. Byakuren : As I thought, I haven't trained enough......
  151. {sad-}
  152. : I'm in a hurry, so I unintentionally used 100%
  153. {small letter : I scared them}
  154. <changed to haven't trained>
  155.  
  156. [4]
  157. {Chou-}
  158. <Choujuu Gigaku on the wall>
  159.  
  160. [5]
  161. Byakuren : That's......
  162.  
  163.  
  164. p13
  165.  
  166. [2]
  167. Kanako : They openly regarded youkai with hostility, an assemble of dangerous lots.
  168. {Especially this, anyway it's this, mainly this}
  169.  
  170.  
  171. [3]
  172. Kanako : The thinking of Shoutoku Taishi herself, that man should also be ruled by man .
  173. : There is also a possibility, that the put up of youkai abolishment will interfere with us god, because it rids the people who pray to us.
  174. <Changed the first one to past tense>
  175.  
  176. [4]
  177. Kanako : If it's become like that, the balance in gensokyo will surely collapse in a moment.
  178. : It seem I have to keep my eye on them too......
  179. <Changed to the balance>
  180.  
  181. [5]
  182. Kanako : I have to work on counter measurement with cooperation from Suwako and Sanae.
  183. {land}
  184. <Changed a bit>
  185.  
  186. p14
  187. [2]
  188. Miko : I got quite accustomed to the life here too......
  189. : Living together, trusting each others, it's as if we are family......
  190. <Fixed the first sentence>
  191.  
  192. [3]
  193. Miko : I wonder, are they getting along even while I'm absence?
  194. <changed a bit>
  195.  
  196. [4] {drag drag}
  197.  
  198. [5]
  199. Byakuren : Though I came back a day earlier, everyone must be doing their training now.
  200. <Fixed some typo and changed a bit>
  201.  
  202. [6]
  203. {Ufufu}
  204. Byakuren : Perhaps, coming back at this time will surprise them.
  205.  
  206.  
  207. p15
  208. [1]
  209. Miko : It's possible that the opponents I met today will be formidable enemies.
  210. <Fixed typo>
  211.  
  212. [2]
  213. Kanako : But we're surely not giving up. We will combine our strength and face them.
  214. <Fixed a bit>
  215.  
  216. [3]
  217. Byakuren : Everyone is a good girl, so what I heard today must be some mistake too......
  218. {Yeah, I'm sure!!}
  219. <changed them>
  220.  
  221.  
  222. p16
  223.  
  224. [2]
  225. Tv : Everyone! Do you want to go to New York? !!
  226. {sluggish}
  227.  
  228. both : Yeaaah-
  229.  
  230. Tv : You don't fear punishment game? !!
  231.  
  232. both : Yeaaah-
  233. <changed "oh" to "Yeah"
  234.  
  235. p17
  236. [5]
  237. {Exhale}
  238.  
  239.  
  240. p18
  241. Free talk
  242.  
  243. Yay, the four wise monkeys! I love Hisaka four wise monkeys!
  244.  
  245. By the way , this is the rare free talk corner! I'm Hisaka.
  246. This time, the book is made from just an amazement because the Symposium of Post-mysticism is interesting,
  247. But to start a free talk because of that amazement, it can be said
  248. that it's somewhat a non-sense recklessness.
  249. <changed a bit>
  250.  
  251. Here goes.
  252.  
  253. Symposium of Post-mysticism is interesting!
  254. From the beginning after I bought it, let's collect material setting and characters setting,
  255. was a feeling I had, but the book structure is in the form of three characters's three corners talk,
  256. evertheless, even for conflicts regarding religion, the image of the top of three power having a conference have
  257. no reason to be not interesting.
  258. <changed a bit>
  259.  
  260. That'shy, when I start reading, I got deeply hooked, I read through small assort of closing till the end.
  261. During the draft's final check, both my worry and delusion continue to swell and show up intil the end,
  262. for the schedule this book got postpone and content changed as of now.
  263. Even so, on one hand I thought, writing the script for the sake of it to release at summer comiket would be a good choice,
  264. but since it's better to strike while iron is hot, I made it this time.
  265. I have no idea that I'll get a correspond to be flexible from Hiyori-san who take charge of drawing, really.
  266. <Changed a bit>
  267.  
  268. For the content of symposium, there are lots of new setting for characters, there are lots more I want to talk,
  269. but first is the four wise monkeys.
  270. Originally from, Season 126, 4th of Shiwasu, Seiga imitate Santa gift custom scene,
  271. I burst into laughter from that, but whose house in subtext is unknown. originally I think, Marisa
  272. got sneaked in but the person who slept have black hair....... Then, there is no more info for a hint,
  273. but I wilden my eye and start checking the illustration.
  274. So, the result, I don't know whose house Seiga sneaked in, but clearly instead of only a figurine that seems useless,
  275. she snatch every thing, Seiga is really Nyan Nyan! Due to my tension rise up,
  276. I just kept reading.
  277. Then, what I didn't notice, that figurine! It's four wise monkeys!
  278. <Changed a bit>
  279.  
  280. Now what's interesting about this, is the point of four wise monkeys production order.
  281. In 7th month Miko announce four wise monkeys, in that year, 12th month Seiga present it on her own accord.
  282. In another word, They surely jump to conclusion on the number of roduction order.
  283. Then number of orders don't match and the stock get surplus. So, Seiga who saw that
  284. use christmas as an excuse to dispose of the no use stock.
  285. Beside for joke, Seiga treat four wise monkeys as a toy.
  286. Miko, with full of confidence, was surely thinking "This can sell!",
  287. but it can't. Just imagine that heart broken look, well up lots of emotion.
  288. Seiga probably knew this toy won't sell from the start but won't stop it.
  289. On top of it, she scattered the useless four wise monkeys as a toy through out
  290. Gensokyo.
  291. When Miko know, her face must've gone red, as if the fire going to come out, due to embarrassment.
  292. And then seeing Miko's face turn real red with anger with nothing to let out to,
  293. Seiga is so happy smirking in the shadow.
  294. With that image in my mind, I smirked.
  295. <Changed some, though I kinda gave up midway and left some part be>
  296.  
  297. p19
  298. By the way until here, there's one page left and if you read it till the end, in my heart, I'm glad.
  299. It just story of figurine but it can flare an imagination.
  300. It's a tension like, won't it be nice if we change the name from Symposium of Post-mysticism to four wise monkeys book.
  301. In the real deal will I be able to convey this excitement more or less?
  302. <changed a bit>
  303.  
  304. And so, though it's a free talk, more than half is the story of four wise monkeys to an extent.
  305. There are others interesting parts, that I can't say it all, but surely, when I read,
  306. I like the conversation of the three the most.
  307. For the way of talking, correspond, and the characterization of all three characters. There are lots of part that give new insight.
  308. Surely there will be lots of stories that can go from there.
  309. For myself, what I'm interest now is Shinreibyou/Ten Desires characters. Miko's normal tone of talking, Futo and Tojiko's past story, Seiga and her position in Gensokyo
  310. and Yoshika secret (?) all become stimulus, once an idea appear.
  311. Just with this, I get a feeling that I'll be able to thought up something again for a while.
  312. Or to say it correctly, I always want to know about ZUN-san great idea.
  313. <Changed some>
  314.  
  315. Finally, free talk changed to 4 wise monkeys talk.
  316. Really, I'm satisfied because I've said what I want.
  317. See you!
  318. <changed some>
  319.  
  320.  
  321. Afterword
  322.  
  323. It's Hisaka again.
  324. I wrote what I want in free talk, so there is not much else.
  325. Anyway, to unveil the plan for another work is quite troublesome.
  326. Even so, it's nice that we successfully complete it.
  327. From now on, I want to continue doujin and creative works, from where I am now
  328. I think I'll try hard treading step by step.
  329. <changed some>
  330.  
  331. [Notification]
  332. Till the end of 2012 Summer Comiket, from fall onward the circle name is changed.
  333. From Strange Chameleon to SutoChame, a short of formal name.
  334. But it's not that we especially change it because of a change of mood or two person circle structure,
  335. from now onward it's the usual run, so please support us.
  336. <changed some>
  337.  
  338. [Notification 2]
  339. We made one short in Comic Valkyrie that release at the end of May. <http://www.comic-valkyrie.com/modules/valkyrie/vol38.html>
  340. We tried hard drawing it, so we'll be happy if you read it.
  341.  
  342. Now then, let's meet again in the next book!
  343.  
  344.  
  345. p20
  346. Circle : <under english name is japanese spelling>
  347. Author : Hiyori Mikagami, Tohru Hisaka
  348. Publish Date : 2012/05/27
  349. The 9th Hakurei shrine Reitaisai
  350. Site :
  351. Original : Team Shanghai Alice
  352. Print : Axis Publication
  353.  
  354. Please refrain from copying, reproduction, etc.
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