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- Note :
- [...] number of panel top to bot right to left. the word bubble also follow same pattern, unless specific in note.
- <...> my comment and reference.
- {...} effect and word that not in bubble. Putting in an effect text or not is left to the editor to decide. If there are a lots I will translated only an important one, or one that can help clarify action. If not much I'll try translated all.
- -----
- Troubling Silly Question of ShinBudTao <The title have the same spelling with SoPM, but with different kanji, thus the different meaning. I changed Tough > Troubling. The rest is the first character of Shinto Buddhist Taoist / Using full name or not is up to editor then.>
- p4
- And so, here's the exceptional preface. I'm Hiyori who's in charge of drawing. Hi Hi. <Changed the first sentence>
- It's good that I bought Symposium of Post-mysticism on the first day of sale but I'm very busy,
- It looks like I no choice but to read it little by little at a time~,
- or that's what I thought.
- When I started reading, it's so interesting, that when I noticed, I already reached the final page in no time.
- So I wrote this with that amazement.
- I'll be happy if you enjoy reading it!
- Byakuren is lovely and pitifully cute. <It can also mean "Byakuren is to be loved and compassionate, so cute", but I guess it's better as is.>
- Now then-.
- <Changed some parts a bit>
- p5 <this page script is from wiki>
- [2]
- Reimu : Before I blow my lid!
- {Slam} <add door SFX>
- p6
- [2]
- Miko : but it was an extremely interesting meeting. {Satisfied}
- <Changed to satisfied>
- [3]
- Miko : I get to have a more clear grasp about humans who live in Gensokyo
- : and come to know the power relationships of this world too.
- <Changed to "more">
- [4]
- Miko : The one that should be especially looked out for are the gods of Moriya shrine.
- : They wield a controlling influence in Gensokyo more than I imagined.
- <Changed to past tense>
- p7
- [1]
- Miko : Religion is a thing like fever.
- : If peoples get inflame to stir up, this world will get remold to what the gods desired.
- <changed to "gods desired">
- [5]
- Kanako : Shoutoku Taishi is a dangerous existence. <or Prince Shoutoku/ refer to Miko>
- : The effects she can give toward our faith is incalculable.
- <changed a bit. Though keeping it as "religion" wouldn't matter much>
- p8
- [1]
- Kanako : The real threat are Byakuren Hijiri and Shou Toramaru.
- : Their existence will surely attract religious people......
- <changed to people>
- [3]
- Kanako : In the near future, there is a high possibility that she will become the greatest obstacle.
- : If I'm not carefully paying attention to her from now on......
- <changed barrier > obstacle>
- [4]
- Byakuren : Today's meeting was fruitful! {Heart warming} <Well actually it's sort of soft and warming>
- <Added "!">
- p9
- [1]
- Byakuren : It's somewhat regrettable that we couldn't talk throughout the night as scheduled.
- : It will be nice if we have an opportunity to meet like this again.
- <Fixed typo>
- [2]
- {Gasp!}
- Byakuren : Come to think of it, when I leave, Shou asked me......
- <Even though there's no "ask", it's okay to add it since we know the context. Or you can just leave it as "..., Shou...">
- [4]
- {Packed}
- Byakuren : This is troublesome, if I don't hurry perhaps I won't be able to buy everything today......
- <changed the SFX and "not" to "don't">
- [5]
- Byakuren : If it turns out like this......
- {unravel}
- <"turn > turns">
- p10
- [1]
- Miko : But really,
- <added really>
- [2]
- Miko : that corrupt priest's confused look was unexpected.
- {Byakuren : Eh? x2}
- {He heh} <Miko's snickering>
- : It's worth going to that place just for that.
- <fixed typo and added SFX>
- [4]
- Miko : Though only for a short time, it's true that my seal got prolonged by her.
- : If she is just a corrupt priest, she shouldn't be able to do such feat. <Changed a bit>
- [5]
- Miko : If I let down my guard, it will be like the time I sleep 1400 years ago......
- {White letter : Baaaam}
- {right of mausoleum : Oh, huh? left : What happen-!?}
- {miko head : pissed}
- <Changed to I sleep. She's talking about the time she got sealed>
- [6]
- Miko : Seems like she uses physical body enhancing technique.
- <Fixed the sentence>
- p11
- [1]
- Miko : Perhaps, I need to look into it further......
- {Haaa-}
- Byakuren : Somehow, I managed to carry out Shou's request, but...... <Changed "this" to "it" and managed>
- [2]
- Tenko : I heard there is a legendary matsutake here, the "CharisMatsutake". <It's a mix of Charisma and Matsutake. If you guys don't get it, from the seller's dialog, it's probably his d**k>
- : Hurry up and bring it out.
- Shop : ......Hmm, to think a person who know that name would appear.
- <Changed a bit, though you're free to keep it or not>
- [3]
- Shop : Alright, I'll show you all of my-
- <sign : Tomato the small letter : fresh>
- <Add I'll show you>
- [4]
- {Startled}
- p12
- [2]
- Byakuren : As I thought, I haven't trained enough......
- {sad-}
- : I'm in a hurry, so I unintentionally used 100%
- {small letter : I scared them}
- <changed to haven't trained>
- [4]
- {Chou-}
- <Choujuu Gigaku on the wall>
- [5]
- Byakuren : That's......
- p13
- [2]
- Kanako : They openly regarded youkai with hostility, an assemble of dangerous lots.
- {Especially this, anyway it's this, mainly this}
- [3]
- Kanako : The thinking of Shoutoku Taishi herself, that man should also be ruled by man .
- : There is also a possibility, that the put up of youkai abolishment will interfere with us god, because it rids the people who pray to us.
- <Changed the first one to past tense>
- [4]
- Kanako : If it's become like that, the balance in gensokyo will surely collapse in a moment.
- : It seem I have to keep my eye on them too......
- <Changed to the balance>
- [5]
- Kanako : I have to work on counter measurement with cooperation from Suwako and Sanae.
- {land}
- <Changed a bit>
- p14
- [2]
- Miko : I got quite accustomed to the life here too......
- : Living together, trusting each others, it's as if we are family......
- <Fixed the first sentence>
- [3]
- Miko : I wonder, are they getting along even while I'm absence?
- <changed a bit>
- [4] {drag drag}
- [5]
- Byakuren : Though I came back a day earlier, everyone must be doing their training now.
- <Fixed some typo and changed a bit>
- [6]
- {Ufufu}
- Byakuren : Perhaps, coming back at this time will surprise them.
- p15
- [1]
- Miko : It's possible that the opponents I met today will be formidable enemies.
- <Fixed typo>
- [2]
- Kanako : But we're surely not giving up. We will combine our strength and face them.
- <Fixed a bit>
- [3]
- Byakuren : Everyone is a good girl, so what I heard today must be some mistake too......
- {Yeah, I'm sure!!}
- <changed them>
- p16
- [2]
- Tv : Everyone! Do you want to go to New York? !!
- {sluggish}
- both : Yeaaah-
- Tv : You don't fear punishment game? !!
- both : Yeaaah-
- <changed "oh" to "Yeah"
- p17
- [5]
- {Exhale}
- p18
- Free talk
- Yay, the four wise monkeys! I love Hisaka four wise monkeys!
- By the way , this is the rare free talk corner! I'm Hisaka.
- This time, the book is made from just an amazement because the Symposium of Post-mysticism is interesting,
- But to start a free talk because of that amazement, it can be said
- that it's somewhat a non-sense recklessness.
- <changed a bit>
- Here goes.
- Symposium of Post-mysticism is interesting!
- From the beginning after I bought it, let's collect material setting and characters setting,
- was a feeling I had, but the book structure is in the form of three characters's three corners talk,
- evertheless, even for conflicts regarding religion, the image of the top of three power having a conference have
- no reason to be not interesting.
- <changed a bit>
- That'shy, when I start reading, I got deeply hooked, I read through small assort of closing till the end.
- During the draft's final check, both my worry and delusion continue to swell and show up intil the end,
- for the schedule this book got postpone and content changed as of now.
- Even so, on one hand I thought, writing the script for the sake of it to release at summer comiket would be a good choice,
- but since it's better to strike while iron is hot, I made it this time.
- I have no idea that I'll get a correspond to be flexible from Hiyori-san who take charge of drawing, really.
- <Changed a bit>
- For the content of symposium, there are lots of new setting for characters, there are lots more I want to talk,
- but first is the four wise monkeys.
- Originally from, Season 126, 4th of Shiwasu, Seiga imitate Santa gift custom scene,
- I burst into laughter from that, but whose house in subtext is unknown. originally I think, Marisa
- got sneaked in but the person who slept have black hair....... Then, there is no more info for a hint,
- but I wilden my eye and start checking the illustration.
- So, the result, I don't know whose house Seiga sneaked in, but clearly instead of only a figurine that seems useless,
- she snatch every thing, Seiga is really Nyan Nyan! Due to my tension rise up,
- I just kept reading.
- Then, what I didn't notice, that figurine! It's four wise monkeys!
- <Changed a bit>
- Now what's interesting about this, is the point of four wise monkeys production order.
- In 7th month Miko announce four wise monkeys, in that year, 12th month Seiga present it on her own accord.
- In another word, They surely jump to conclusion on the number of roduction order.
- Then number of orders don't match and the stock get surplus. So, Seiga who saw that
- use christmas as an excuse to dispose of the no use stock.
- Beside for joke, Seiga treat four wise monkeys as a toy.
- Miko, with full of confidence, was surely thinking "This can sell!",
- but it can't. Just imagine that heart broken look, well up lots of emotion.
- Seiga probably knew this toy won't sell from the start but won't stop it.
- On top of it, she scattered the useless four wise monkeys as a toy through out
- Gensokyo.
- When Miko know, her face must've gone red, as if the fire going to come out, due to embarrassment.
- And then seeing Miko's face turn real red with anger with nothing to let out to,
- Seiga is so happy smirking in the shadow.
- With that image in my mind, I smirked.
- <Changed some, though I kinda gave up midway and left some part be>
- p19
- By the way until here, there's one page left and if you read it till the end, in my heart, I'm glad.
- It just story of figurine but it can flare an imagination.
- It's a tension like, won't it be nice if we change the name from Symposium of Post-mysticism to four wise monkeys book.
- In the real deal will I be able to convey this excitement more or less?
- <changed a bit>
- And so, though it's a free talk, more than half is the story of four wise monkeys to an extent.
- There are others interesting parts, that I can't say it all, but surely, when I read,
- I like the conversation of the three the most.
- For the way of talking, correspond, and the characterization of all three characters. There are lots of part that give new insight.
- Surely there will be lots of stories that can go from there.
- For myself, what I'm interest now is Shinreibyou/Ten Desires characters. Miko's normal tone of talking, Futo and Tojiko's past story, Seiga and her position in Gensokyo
- and Yoshika secret (?) all become stimulus, once an idea appear.
- Just with this, I get a feeling that I'll be able to thought up something again for a while.
- Or to say it correctly, I always want to know about ZUN-san great idea.
- <Changed some>
- Finally, free talk changed to 4 wise monkeys talk.
- Really, I'm satisfied because I've said what I want.
- See you!
- <changed some>
- Afterword
- It's Hisaka again.
- I wrote what I want in free talk, so there is not much else.
- Anyway, to unveil the plan for another work is quite troublesome.
- Even so, it's nice that we successfully complete it.
- From now on, I want to continue doujin and creative works, from where I am now
- I think I'll try hard treading step by step.
- <changed some>
- [Notification]
- Till the end of 2012 Summer Comiket, from fall onward the circle name is changed.
- From Strange Chameleon to SutoChame, a short of formal name.
- But it's not that we especially change it because of a change of mood or two person circle structure,
- from now onward it's the usual run, so please support us.
- <changed some>
- [Notification 2]
- We made one short in Comic Valkyrie that release at the end of May. <http://www.comic-valkyrie.com/modules/valkyrie/vol38.html>
- We tried hard drawing it, so we'll be happy if you read it.
- Now then, let's meet again in the next book!
- p20
- Circle : <under english name is japanese spelling>
- Author : Hiyori Mikagami, Tohru Hisaka
- Publish Date : 2012/05/27
- The 9th Hakurei shrine Reitaisai
- Site :
- Original : Team Shanghai Alice
- Print : Axis Publication
- Please refrain from copying, reproduction, etc.
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