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  1. Azumarill — fairly recent and looks fine
  2. Gliscor — been through a lot of revamps and looks fine
  3. Scizor — already mentioned the 120hp/252atk/136spe spread on cb which is what everyone uses. pursuit could also be slashed before knock but not a big deal
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  5. Aerodactyl-Mega — “Additionally, utility options such as Stealth Rock, Taunt, and Defog allow it to support its team if necessary. Focus Sash Aerodactyl is a fast, efficient suicide lead with high base Speed to outpace other suicide leads such as Azelf and Froslass, access to Stealth Rock and Taunt, and a way of KOing itself to prevent opposing Defog and Rapid Spin. However, this set is only useful to hyper offense teams that want a good matchup against other hazard leads.” that paragraph from overview really feels like it should be in oo
  6. Altaria-Mega — quite a few outdated mentions with rotom and mamo but sets and everything are fine
  7. Hydreigon — fine i gped it
  8. Latias — spoke to you before imo sets should be cm then scarf then lo but up to you and i would also slash defog on scarf and mention ice beam in moves but again up to you
  9. Manectric-Mega — a lot of rotom because they paired rly well
  10. Serperior — giga drain could have a mention but fairly recent so only real problem is mamo stuff
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  12. Amoonguss — poisonium z is pretty common to deal with non ice punch azu taking less from knock and being able to threaten it; it’s very common because it checks loom and azu which aren’t mentioned at all so if look doesn’t get banned or anything a revamp sounds good imo
  13. Breloom — went up this week so fine
  14. Cobalion — seems fine just with a few outdated mentions (slowbro a lot which isn’t really viable)
  15. Infernape — reads like it’s been updated with azu and gengar mentions
  16. Muk-Alola — overview says outspeed by scizor and then set details says that the speed evs outspeed uninvested which is only a thing on bulky which doesn’t die to fire punch so not really sure about the speed in general but it was approved so not an issue just the mentions are contradictory; imo alolan muk’s role honestly wants poison jab slashed over funk shot for the poison chance and reliability but up to you
  17. Primarina — already talked about this and definitely needs a revamp tbh
  18. Suicune — fine apart from the fact it doesn’t mention breloom or serperior as answers to it
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  20. Alomomola — “it can be turned into setup fodder by Pokemon that it cannot threaten, like Gliscor, and Substitute users, such as Suicune and Kyurem.” this implies kyurem sets up. a lot of rotom and mamo mentions. this really needs to cover grasses more because stuff like serp and loom really threaten it, even np celebi which is seeing more usage. would either revamp or rewrite on cms with these grasses. the ev spread could also do with more explanation because it’s not max max
  21. Blissey — like 1 mamo mention but recent so fine
  22. Gengar — being worked on
  23. Heracross — “set up on Pokemon that can't do much back to Heracross, such as Blissey, Quagsire, and Toxic Hippowdon, or against Pokemon that it forces out, such as Blissey and Krookodile.” not a fan of using blissey for both here and it doesn’t really work in the first category because nobody stays in ever. also a lot of outdated mentions
  24. Klefki — a ton of outdated mentions but otherwise fine really
  25. Krookodile — not sure why there’s like 5 venomoth mentions and arcanine ones but otherwise fine
  26. Pidgeot-Mega — the work up roost refresh stallbreaker set honestly needs a set imo, it’s really solid and does really well against bulky teams. this kinda needs a full revamp tbh due to the sheer number of rotom mentions because that was one of the best answers to it
  27. Sharpedo-Mega — this says Strong Jaws instead of Strong Jaw like 5 times. “Despite Mega Sharpedo's very limited defensive utility, its key resistances to two big priority moves in Ice Shard and Bullet Punch make it more difficult to revenge kill. “ lol. this could probably be revamped due to the arrival of loom/serp/azu and also the prevalence of mane too, which isn’t mentioned.
  28. Starmie — this also needs to mention loom/serp too. there’s a whole rotom-w section in c&c which is basically useless too, mega manectric also is barely touched on.
  29. Swampert — mamo and arcanine (lol) mentions and no loom ones
  30. Tentacruel — mamo mentions but otherwise fine. a mention in moves could also be given to a poison stab move which has been seeing usage due to loom/azu
  31. Togekiss — “Togekiss can utilize several options in its expansive movepool including Aura Sphere, Dazzling Gleam, and Fire Blast.” this shouldn’t be in oo because they’re on the specs set. steel types should probably be second in c&c too. there’s a few outdated mentions as well
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  34. Azelf — serperior could also be mentioned as a defog deterrent and there’s a few outdated mentions but this mon is super straightforward so fine
  35. Chandelure — could probably do with mentioning azu in revenge killers in c&c and outdated mentions but otherwise fine
  36. Crobat — when talking about infiltrator sub serp and kommo-o are good examples because brave bird nukes them. “Crobat can switch in on resisted hits from Pokemon such as Heracross (beware of Ice Punch, however)” uh what it doesn’t learn that. scarf lati should go in c&c with other scarfers, and cut the mamo section.
  37. Empoleon
  38. Hippowdon
  39. Houndoom-Mega
  40. Kyurem
  41. Moltres
  42. Nidoking
  43. Nihilego — being worked on (lol)
  44. Stakataka
  45. Sylveon
  46. Terrakion
  47. Volcanion
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