Azalea 3 Event json Review

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Konoha: We've been unreasonably pushed around by our circumstances,@and we had lost everything important to us,@so we've been living our lives while trusting only each other.
--> add line breaks after "around" and "lives"

Konoha: But when we met other Magical Girls who bore the same fate as us,@we began to think that maybe, there were others we could trust...@Little by little, we began to get involved with the people around us.
--> add line breaks after "Girls", "maybe", and involved

*Ping*♪
--> add the [se:7106_telmail] tag here

Konoha: A system that prevents Magical Girls from transforming into Witches,@the "Automatic Purification System," has appeared in Kamihama.@And the situation is becoming one where Magical Girls may@launch an attack anywhere, anytime...
--> add line breaks after "Girls" and "System"

Konoha: I've been covertly investigating the Magical Girls from elsewhere@to dispel my ominous premonition, but@I haven't found any useful information.@Hazuki's right, perhaps it's time...
--> move the 1st line break to before "elsewhere"


513206-6_N0dw3
Konoha: I ignored all the information that reached my ears.@No matter what happened in Kamihama or to Magical Girls we knew,@it was happening in a world that had nothing to do with us.
--> add a line break after "Kamihama"

Konoha: If I hadn't been so afraid,@and listened to Hazuki's suggestion for us to become bodyguards,@Ayame's fate and our future might have been different...
--> add a line break after "suggestion"


513208-8_N0dw3
Ayame: Hmm... I'd be lonely, and worried...@[chara:302801:lipSynch_0][wait:1.2][chara:302801:cheek_0][chara:302801:face_mtn_ex_020.exp.json:motion_200][chara:302801:lipSynch_1]And I'dwanna know why they left!
--> add a space in between "I'dwanna"

Hazuki: Oh, wait up, Nayuta@ We'll be there too, of course.
--> remove the space after the line break


513210-10_N0dw3
*Ping*♪
--> add the [se:7106_telmail] tag here


513211-11_N0dw3
Client: Hotori Yuzuki@Request: I'm training against Witches, can you coach me?
--> add a line break after "coach" (or "Witches")


513214-14_N0dw3
Client: Chika Aoba@Request: Please attract the Neo-Magius' attention for just one day.
--> add a line break after "attention"


513217-17_N0dw3
Client: Maria Yuki@Request: Can you help me exterminate a Witch?@              Please do it by the end of today...!
--> add four more spaces after the 2nd line break (to align it with the first part of the line, and do the same to the two above this.)


513220-20_N0dw3
Konoha: We've been trying to stay neutral by not associating with anyone,@but now that we've started working as bodyguards@and getting involved with other Magical Girls,@we're slowly changing.
--> add a line break after "neutral"

Client: Sae Kirino@Request: Please kill this Witch with me!@              Come to the cargo port in Minaminagi ASAP!
--> add four more spaces after the 2nd line break


513222-22_N0dw3
Hazuki: Haven't you tell Ayame? The rumor of@Sae's disappearance...
--> change "tell" to "told"


513230-30_N0dw3
Ayame: —Ayame—@Sae!@
--> remove the last linebreak


513251-51_wFvmE
Konoha: —Konoha—@...Don't tell [email protected]'s dead...?
--> before this line, it's missing a CG narration line from Hazuki; it made the rest of the json misaligned.


513260-60_wFvmE
Konoha: I think we could regain a bit of trust from Magical Girls.
--> add a line break after "Magical"


513271-71_wFvmE
Konoha: There were times when I thought that@considering my own dreams was a betrayal to Hazuki and Ayame,@but now I understand...
--> add a line break after "dreams"