Tayter_Kat

Vizor

Aug 12th, 2015
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  1. Hello there Vizor, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your initiate plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to barns. Your plot has a very large structure, and that's a good thing. Onw thing to focus on is adding depth to the structure. Depth is the layers within a structure to make it more appealing. You can add stairs, slabs, and fences to the sides. If you want to add detailing as well, I suggest adding buttons and trap doors. If you need an example of depth, try visiting /warp depthtutorial. This shows you haw to add depth and some bad examples as well.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living. like animals and trees. Your trees are alright, but they looks distracting since they are built out of glass. Maybe try building them out of different blocks to make it seem more realistic and interesting.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain is very flat, so I suggest fixing that. Add more hills and craters all around the plot to fix this.
  9. Other:
  10. This is anything that does not fit into the previous categories. Ones thing I suggest is changing the overall blocks you build with. For example the ground. The blocks are a bit distracting (for the lack of a better word). I suggest building out of different blocks, or choose a different palette. Sadly, it might even be easier do start over on your plot so you don't do more work fixing everything when you could just start over.
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  12. Good Luck<333
  13. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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