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  1. HeliaYesterday at 9:15 PM
  2. @SomeKindofWizard Sure! I’ll give you the details in MP.
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  4. (Though, Taosym, I’m not sure what you’re referring to as the only scene on the balcony in this Chapter is when Seriva meets princess Eleyna.)
  5. TaosymToday at 5:22 AM
  6. I'm taking about the scene when Seriva and Mercilia on the balcony at the end of the party
  7. @SomeKindofWizard Was the location of that scene changed
  8. SomeKindofWizardToday at 5:23 AM
  9. I have nfi.
  10. TaosymToday at 5:28 AM
  11. It was in the script last time I read it.
  12. Chapter 1 ends with Mercilia crying, that's an extremely important moment.
  13. I'll check it out again, until then carry on as normal, everything else is fine, I just need to find where that ending went.
  14. TaosymToday at 5:40 AM
  15. This isn't super urgent, since Helia just started on the party stuff and there's some other scenes to finish.
  16. But a clean draft of the scene when you have the time would really help
  17. It kind of goes from Seriva meeting Llend to finding Mercilia, so we might need a transition in the Queen's Hallways before Seriva finds Mercilia
  18. SomeKindofWizardToday at 6:02 AM
  19. Okay, I'll add it to the pile >>
  20. HeliaToday at 6:49 AM
  21. @Taosym There's no scene with Seriva and Mercilia on the balcony (outside meeting Eleyna, that is), that's why I'm confused. After the big announcement, Mercilia immediately hides in a random room to cry and doesn't let Seriva in. And then there are still a few things happening before the party is over (most notably Seriva meeting the queen in private). The Chapter ends with Yuliana and Panna discussing "sabotaging" Mercilia's future reign instead.
  22. TaosymToday at 6:52 AM
  23. I feel like when I read & prepped the scripts for editing and such they were different, but I'm not going to fight the issue then.
  24. Because the endings in my mind that we had talked about for years are different, and maybe these are better and I should let the music/art carry it
  25. So I guess to not put pressure on anyone to change everything, just proceed with the current 1.1 script ending
  26. HeliaToday at 6:59 AM
  27. The script seems to have changed a lot between iterations so it's understandably quite confusing at times. That's where bringing an outsider perspective can be useful. Anyway, if there's anything you'd like to change, I guess there's still a bit of time?
  28. TaosymToday at 7:02 AM
  29. My thinking is Skow wrote that ending for a reason, and if we change it throws off Ch2
  30. Since she's hiding for awhile at the start of Ch2.
  31. Anyways, I'm just under stress, don't worry about it.
  32. TaosymToday at 7:39 AM
  33. The Balcony will be easy since I can repurpose some things
  34. Looking at the art list most of it's easy, I also plan to do the silhouettes all in one burst. So I should be able to just finish a bunch of them in a day.
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