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- HeliaYesterday at 9:15 PM
- @SomeKindofWizard Sure! I’ll give you the details in MP.
- (Though, Taosym, I’m not sure what you’re referring to as the only scene on the balcony in this Chapter is when Seriva meets princess Eleyna.)
- TaosymToday at 5:22 AM
- I'm taking about the scene when Seriva and Mercilia on the balcony at the end of the party
- @SomeKindofWizard Was the location of that scene changed
- SomeKindofWizardToday at 5:23 AM
- I have nfi.
- TaosymToday at 5:28 AM
- It was in the script last time I read it.
- Chapter 1 ends with Mercilia crying, that's an extremely important moment.
- I'll check it out again, until then carry on as normal, everything else is fine, I just need to find where that ending went.
- TaosymToday at 5:40 AM
- This isn't super urgent, since Helia just started on the party stuff and there's some other scenes to finish.
- But a clean draft of the scene when you have the time would really help
- It kind of goes from Seriva meeting Llend to finding Mercilia, so we might need a transition in the Queen's Hallways before Seriva finds Mercilia
- SomeKindofWizardToday at 6:02 AM
- Okay, I'll add it to the pile >>
- HeliaToday at 6:49 AM
- @Taosym There's no scene with Seriva and Mercilia on the balcony (outside meeting Eleyna, that is), that's why I'm confused. After the big announcement, Mercilia immediately hides in a random room to cry and doesn't let Seriva in. And then there are still a few things happening before the party is over (most notably Seriva meeting the queen in private). The Chapter ends with Yuliana and Panna discussing "sabotaging" Mercilia's future reign instead.
- TaosymToday at 6:52 AM
- I feel like when I read & prepped the scripts for editing and such they were different, but I'm not going to fight the issue then.
- Because the endings in my mind that we had talked about for years are different, and maybe these are better and I should let the music/art carry it
- So I guess to not put pressure on anyone to change everything, just proceed with the current 1.1 script ending
- HeliaToday at 6:59 AM
- The script seems to have changed a lot between iterations so it's understandably quite confusing at times. That's where bringing an outsider perspective can be useful. Anyway, if there's anything you'd like to change, I guess there's still a bit of time?
- TaosymToday at 7:02 AM
- My thinking is Skow wrote that ending for a reason, and if we change it throws off Ch2
- Since she's hiding for awhile at the start of Ch2.
- Anyways, I'm just under stress, don't worry about it.
- TaosymToday at 7:39 AM
- The Balcony will be easy since I can repurpose some things
- Looking at the art list most of it's easy, I also plan to do the silhouettes all in one burst. So I should be able to just finish a bunch of them in a day.
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