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Tel'Adre Overhaul (only Rubi for now)

Feb 19th, 2020
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  2. │ Rubi │
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  4. It would be nice if Rubi didn't work 24/7 in the Bakery and had specific hours he works. This would make it so you can visit his home (if unlocked) on his off hours via the Homes menu, giving that some more use and meat when it's the logical thing to do.
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  6. Currently from the moment you meet Rubi it displays a stat called "Rubi’s Orifice Capacity" on the Stats menu. This shouldn't be there until you've actually done anything sexual with him.
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  8. If you choose Reject with Rubi at 30% affection it straight up removes him from the game. I doubt he would just quit his job after you reject his advances, so preferably variations for seeing him at the bakery would be written where he acts a little awkward around you (or whatever is in character for him). Either that, or make a Prefer Girls option with a route that lets you turn him into a girl before entering a relationship with him.
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  10. Also, if you remove him from the game via Reject, the Affection and Orifice stats stay on the Stats menu and being completely redundant. Is there a precedent on removing things like this?
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  12. The choices of starting to date or completely reject the existence of a character are far too black and white. It should be possible to simply be friends with him and just maybe leave room open to revisit the topic.
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  14. Should the Rubi's Place option even be in his menu before it's accessible?
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  16. The names of the items you can give him don't all have their button names the same as the item button names. The Same goes for the clothes.
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  18. For some reason Pure Peaches TF him into a sharpy. This is inconsistent with what they're supposed to do and makes no sense at all for the item to do this.
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  20. >You raise a hand and bring it down onto her pale ass
  21. Even though her skin is entirely red.
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  23. >the girlish brunette leans down
  24. Her hair isn't brown either, it was black in her Closet description.
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  26. >a lacy corset compresses her middle slightly and amplifies her next-to-nonexistent chest
  27. I wouldn't call B cup "next-to-nonexistent".
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  29. Getting Rubi to wear the RisqueUniform only presents a Next option which just brings you back to the menu to present him with items.
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  32. If you fuck his ass without a penis you tie a dildo to yourself with stray rope from an alley. It would be nice if this accounted for the demonic strapon in the scene and reworded things accordingly with it and the climax.
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  34. >out of your packand gather up some
  35. Missing space
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