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- Hello MaxTheHappyPanda, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
- Building:
- Well your building does have depth, so that is a great thing!!! good job
- Terrain/Organics:
- Your terrain is very boxy. Try making it more smoother and it would look more appealing. Also, the lowest level of ground you have is very flat. Try adding more hills and/or crevasses to the terrain to make it more real. Lastly, try making your own trees instead of bone meal trees.
- Good Luck! <3
- -Tayter_Kat
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