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- Hello ashleyc417!
- My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot! Lets start off with your structure.
- You main structure is pretty well detailed but lacks depth. It doesnt really match the style of the crushed house either. You stairways is pretty neat and adds detail to your cave. Try to build more structures next time and dont forget about detail and depth. If you need reference on these, go to ./warp depthtutorial
- You trees are pretty nice and I like how you slightly add some different leaves for color and variation. What's really unique is the toppled down tree thats on fire on the house. That was really creative and full of thought.Try working on your tree trunks and roots a little bit more. You have provided a good amount of trees and they really work well based on the size of your plot.
- Your terrain is the best part. I love how you used so many different blocks to it. It adds so much color, variation and detail to your plot. You hills are nice a smoothed well. The corner of your plot has a sphere shaped terrain that needs some smoothing. You cave must have had a lot of effort put into it and it is really nice especially with the stairway complimenting it.
- Overall, I think you have put a lot of effort into your plot and you deserve a rank up. Try to fix some of these things thou. Good Luck and I hope to see more of your creations in the future. to start your next plot, do ./warp novice and /plot auto. :DDDD
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