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- Hello MaxTime!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure is pretty nice and has some decent detailing and depth. Try to work on it more with future plots thou.
- Your tress are shamed upon because they're bonemealed. We dont rank up bonemealed trees so make them custom. Dont forget the branches and roots.
- Your terrain is flat and needs variation. Try to add other blocks such as green clay, gravel, cobblestone, etc. Also Try smoothing ur mountain down so it looks more natural because rn it looks to squarish like a box.
- I think you need to show a little more effort and work on your plot b4 i can rank u. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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