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- Judge Cookie (Extra)
- Gallery first, yet again. I'm going to give this a solid 7; the sprinkler system, not to mention literally everything Ruby does with her sand, is great for making an absolute mess out of the store. Lucil's trashing of the store to give herself more teleportation points also contributes quite nicely. Add a little bit of arson into the mix, and you've got a pretty solid Jojolity.
- As for Evergreen, despite my qualms about the effectiveness of the Our-nado on the quality side, its impact as a Jojolity play has no such issues. Even if he only goes for a brief time, the sheer damage he's going to do in the process will rack up quite the hefty damages bill. Muuru doesn't slouch either, getting Mili's Husband to do the Jojolity for him by smashing stalls with his reckless, uncontrollably accelerated B POW punches. On the whole, I'll give this a **9.**
- Judge Cracker (Surface)
- For Gallery, I can see the sort of efficiency they went with showing through in their jojolity. They never really make "jojolity plays" moreso then letting their jojolity shine through their tactics in a well-presented and efficient way. While none of their maneuvers particularly wowed me, the effectiveness through which it was woven into their strat earns them a solid **8** in my book.
- For Evergreen, **10**. Someone literally could not ask for a more chaotic strat in both presentation and in content. Or, rather, they couldn't reasonably- because it's not something that could be done. Every action in this strat is built to maximize chaos and tear down order. What else is there to say but "good job" and "we aren't letting you two pair up again"?
- Judge Biscuit (Ceep)
- These are already late so I’ll be brief, Gallery gets a 8/10, it feels nice and purposeful, and everything fit into it well. I think both Lucil and Ruby play into this solidly, and the sort of calculated parts of it worked well for me. I think this is a great show for the characters starting out.
- I’ll talk more about Evergreen; I was a bit on the harsh side in Quality, but this is by no means a bad strategy. While held back in terms of Quality by logistical issues, the narrative of the Evergreen strategy is top notch, with a great sense of how it flows together. Given the logistical issues I had I think you’re a bit slower than you want to be which is really the only thing holding this back from a 9. You get a high 8/10, exceptional work.
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