GT - Today at 11:37 PM
alright I've skimmed through
the writing seemed grammatically correct so I didn't really bother reading much of the lines LOL
I can see stuff I hate/warning signs already tho and I screech
GamingFennex - Today at 11:38 PM
you have so much faith in my friend I can tell
like?
GT - Today at 11:38 PM
well first thing I noticed was that a certain "cheesefestivities" was the one running it
I know you can't really do much about it
But I hope they've improved since they applied here
GamingFennex - Today at 11:39 PM
GT's a good friend, and they're not afraid to run things by me or come to me for advice.
GT - Today at 11:40 PM
I'm guessing you mean cheese :P
GamingFennex - Today at 11:40 PM
yes.
GT - Today at 11:40 PM
Yeah I know him, we rped together once
GamingFennex - Today at 11:40 PM
He's a good Rper.
GT - Today at 11:41 PM
his murder plan... wasn't very original LOL
GamingFennex - Today at 11:41 PM
Trust me, this first case
GT - Today at 11:41 PM
but that was like the start of this year
so
GamingFennex - Today at 11:41 PM
Oh, yeah
I didn't even know him back then.
GT - Today at 11:41 PM
Ye
GamingFennex - Today at 11:41 PM
He's been really good since I've known him.
GT - Today at 11:41 PM
Alright next thing
I didn't count but "17 students"
boi
b o i
I hope one is impersonating another or something
because that just seems to be bloating up an already bloated cast
GamingFennex - Today at 11:43 PM
...wait hang on
GT - Today at 11:43 PM
Dunno how that'd work with trial seating either, tho since it's an audio drama I guess you don't need to worry about that
Hm?
GamingFennex - Today at 11:44 PM
Okay so I sent a list of characters to Garbage and realized i left one off
unrelated
GT - Today at 11:45 PM
O
GamingFennex - Today at 11:45 PM
but in any case...
GT - Today at 11:45 PM
Yup so there's that
GamingFennex - Today at 11:45 PM
...I really shouldn't say why there's 17.
But it does work for what's happening.
GT - Today at 11:45 PM
Whatever it's for, I will say that there's a reason why most fanfics and all canon games never extend past 16
Especially in this format
it's gonna be bloated
next thing
Being a "surrealist" is not a talent, this character sounds like they belong in a psych ward good lord
garbageGothic - Today at 11:47 PM
Same
GT - Today at 11:47 PM
I mean, big mood
but
garbageGothic - Today at 11:47 PM
He's the odd one out
GT - Today at 11:47 PM
character traits aren't talents b o i
garbageGothic - Today at 11:47 PM
Human trait talent
GamingFennex - Today at 11:47 PM
actually
GT - Today at 11:47 PM
It also makes him really 1 dimensional
GamingFennex - Today at 11:47 PM
I think it'd be a bit more fair if you voiced these directly to Cheese
GT - Today at 11:47 PM
Because you're going "well he can only act this way"
GamingFennex - Today at 11:47 PM
I asked, they're okay with hearing these
GT - Today at 11:48 PM
Screenshot away :P