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- Hey there :3
- Firstly, I'm going to talk a bit about your terrain. I like it a lot. You have a good diversity in the layering, and a really complex and original palette on the base of the plot - it would be nice if you incorporated this into all the areas of your grass, maybe just use a little less stonebrick in the higher areas though - could be like a pathway leading up the cliffs.
- You could also mix some blocks into the stone - andesite/clay etc. I have to say I really like the atmosphere you've created on this plot, however.
- Secondly, organics. You have some really nice trees on this plot! My only issue is the largest tree. It feels a bit too chubby, and without roots/lots of branches, it's just a bit out of place. Look up Pluto's God Tree tutorials for some hints, possibly? The leaves are also too obviously world edited - you can make out the spheres, and it just doesn't look too nice. I recommend a higher air percentage in the brush you used.
- It may also be a nice idea to include another kind of organic on this plot. As you're aspirant, it would help you a lot with ranking - maybe a kind of animal, small or large, would be nice!
- Lastly, structure. The structures you have are really nice, you just need some more of them! The house you've made; you could make some more houses similar to this, some smaller, different designs etc; but make like a small village or something, on the paved area you have.
- You are also going to need at least one large structure just to show that you have the skills for large scale building.
- The hot air balloon is really nice! I'd suggest making a couple more of them in the air cx
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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