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- Hey this is Jewsef and I'm going to review your plot.
- Okay, I'm going to keep things simple here.
- Terrain: Good variation in blocks. Your terrain could use a bit more smoothing. You need to show clearly the transition from the ground to the cliff. Flat in some places, fix it.
- Structure: Good shape and idea, detailing is not bad but the structure needs more depth. Would recommend using stone bricks instead of cobble.
- Organics: Make the trees have roots and for the leaves try using:
- //mask air
- then
- //br sphere 90%air,10%(blocks you wanna use.)
- Side notes: - Fill up more space on your plot.
- - Remove the black stained glass from the water.
- - reduce the amount of leaves on the terrain
- Hope this helps and good luck!
- ~Regards, Jewsef.
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