Jewsef

Frostwarrior54's review

Jun 25th, 2015
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  1. Hey this is Jewsef and I'm going to review your plot.
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  3. Okay, I'm going to keep things simple here.
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  5. Terrain: Good variation in blocks. Your terrain could use a bit more smoothing. You need to show clearly the transition from the ground to the cliff. Flat in some places, fix it.
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  7. Structure: Good shape and idea, detailing is not bad but the structure needs more depth. Would recommend using stone bricks instead of cobble.
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  9. Organics: Make the trees have roots and for the leaves try using:
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  11. //mask air
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  13. then
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  15. //br sphere 90%air,10%(blocks you wanna use.)
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  17. Side notes: - Fill up more space on your plot.
  18. - Remove the black stained glass from the water.
  19. - reduce the amount of leaves on the terrain
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  21. Hope this helps and good luck!
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  23. ~Regards, Jewsef.
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