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- Novice Review:
- Really neat plot so far, but theres a few things to work on before ranking up!
- I wanna preface this review by saying that normally modern builds such as this arent ranked.
- Anyway! Lets get on with it x3
- First off, your terrain is decent. A little rough and boxy in some places, so try and smooth that out some, or work something around it to make it less so!
- The organics on the plot are decent, but they need some work. (by "they" i mean your 3 trees x3 ) Try to make them a bit bigger, and fluff out the leaves some more to make them seem more tree-like! Also, adding a few more around the plot never hurt anyone :D
- The structures on the plot need a bit of improving as well. Instead of having a modern take on the plot, i would recommend having a more stylistic approach. What i mean by that, is to simply take a style like western, or medieval, and apply it to your plot!
- The train is super cool, but try to give it more texture and a more complex look to it. Same goes for the rest of your structures. Try to add depth by giving the builds more layers to them, and add detailing with stairs, slabs, fences, buttons or whatever you want x3 Be careful not to over detail though! It makes the builds look messy :p
- I hope this helps! Good luck!
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