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- Hello Jwle7, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing you Initiate plot...
- Structure:
- This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have a structure, but it does not show the components needed to rank up. I recommend adding a house to your plot ,with depth, to show more skills. Depth is the layers within a structure/building. You can add depth by incorporating slabs, stairs, fences, buttons, and trap doors. IF you need a visual EXAMPLE ,do not copy, try visiting /warp depthtutorial.
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is very flat. so I recommend adding more hills, craters, cliffs, or whatever you want to make it more realistic. Almost anything is better than flat terrain!
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have some trees and they are eligible for you to rank up with. So great job here!
- Other:
- This is anything that cannot fit into the previous categories. Sadly, pixels art is not accepted, so I recommend deleting this. Also, the island above the plot makes no sense with the rest of it. I recommend making it fit into the theme or remove it entirely.
- Fix the thing mentioned above and you do great! good luck<3
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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