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  1. Alright, I've covered every lasso who hasn't gotten a crit or compliment on their work in the past 3 threads. So if I skipped you, IT'S YOUR PUNISHMENT FOR NOT DRAWING TODAY
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  3. https://dad.gallery/submissions?date=2018-04-13
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  5. >the1banana
  6. you're busy doing dev work so i guess i can let this slide since you don't have the time- JUST KIDDING. YOU ALWAYS HAVE TIME TO DRAW. BELEIVE IN YOURSELF, AND DRAW, DAD! DRAW!!!!!
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  8. >echo
  9. T H I C C. got dam
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  11. >Dasani
  12. so soft. too soft. be brave and work in some hard edges or textures
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  14. >nka
  15. you're going in the right direction the way you do your hard edges with shading. keep polishing that. your line confidence will also inprove the more comfortable you get studying models
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  17. >Choob - All these choobposters and yet no one's given you a crit. I have half a mind to name YOU the >>skipped shitposter. Anyways, your mech is great, if not lacking in detail in spots. the soft glow captures that nostalgic feel
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  19. >Pawn
  20. favorite mech post so far. please finish the mr t mech i beg you
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  22. >Carl
  23. dammit i want to see more detail on these. they look cool- but plain as they are right now
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  25. >Agent
  26. good proportions, but see some tutorials for watercolors and how they work
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  28. >Moirem
  29. Those leggings- teach me senpai. your stuff's aesthetic as fuck
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  31. >Sun
  32. come on man- you detailed the asshole and not the face? its jarring. but you got my attention where you wanted it so- good job on that
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  34. >Dakkon
  35. keep grinding- and keep working on those line weights. you can DO IT
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  37. >Dataizm
  38. i cant critique this in a way that's helpful since i dont animate. but its cute and lively
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  40. >Subcryo
  41. the armor sets are mostly generic, you want to hit those references hard for inspiration. you'll also save time by copy-pasting a base body to draw over. work smarter not harder
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  43. >Beanhead
  44. these are cute! the edges are blotchy, but such is water color
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  46. >niche
  47. keep grinding my dude, i beleive in you
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  49. >worm
  50. woah- these studies are niceu. keep doin what youre doin
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  52. >EldritchSinner
  53. cute concept. apart from the robot's tractor wheels, the machine and characters appear pretty flat. you may want to brush up on drapery also
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  55. >Kivuli
  56. do some environmental studies lad. there are also tutorials and process videos of how other artists put together environments. they're worth a watch- backgrounds are a different beast from human anatomy
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  58. >Aren
  59. i see where you were a less patient with the shading, but the banans you spent time on look nice
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  61. >psiekier
  62. simple! but in a good way. the perspective is nicely done. this looks like a solid underdrawing for something more detailed though
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  64. >tabascoshrimp
  65. nice lighting. same as with Srion, the textures could be rendered more. but as a study it's good.
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  67. >Inno
  68. interesting study- i enjoy the little elements you added like the cane and earrings. her left eye is a bit buggy though, like it's drifting to the left.
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  70. >Srion
  71. really convincing lighting, my complaint is that it could be rendered more. it lacks texture but is nice and simple otherwise
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  73. >GND
  74. nice job doing gestures in 3D- keep cranking them out and you will truly make it friend
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  76. >gryphon
  77. very nice line weights! your work is just so nice to look at. not really my taste as far as subject matter goes, but it looks /good/. keep doin that
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  79. >CoinHero
  80. this is looking pretty good as you paint more- i'm digging the colors. as it is now though, the car looks static
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  82. >st⋆rs
  83. looks like a comfy set-up, i cant wait to see how this turns out! i hope you're using refs to seat those cat people on that couch :^)
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  85. >Peltingfury
  86. you've got some nice hard edges here. have a little more patience though- i can see it running out as you progress
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  88. >_
  89. AT LEAST DRAW ON IT YOU ASSHOLE
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