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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres some stuff you should work on before ranking up!
- First off, the lower part of your plot is decent, but there needs to be a tad more structure. The structure you have on the plot is fine, but there just needs to be more!Though, do be careful of over-detailing. That can result in slab-spam, stair-spam and the structures will generally look messy!
- The terrain is good, but its a bit smooth and linear in some places, so just rough that up. Mainly along the edge of the terrain on the lower half :p
- Now I know Jewsef said to add more organics, but i think you went a little too far xD The organics you had originally were fine, but he just meant to add more to fill the empty space on your plot! Anywho, the trees need to be less solid, so try to add a higher percentage of air in to your brush when youre doing them, and make sure to smooth out the trunks so i cant see any world edit spheres :p
- The higher organics make little sense in relevance to your plots, theme, but okay. The humanoid needs some shaping and smoothing, i would recommend looking up human organics on google or PMC to get an idea. The mini serpent is cute, but doesnt go with the plot. Then again, neither does the human :p
- Either way, good luck with your plot!
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