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- 310352-1
- Alexandra: As usual,@they thought I was joking@and didn't get the message.@But I wasn't sad.
- --> change "they" to "he"
- 310352-3
- Everyone: "Happy birthday to youuu~♪"
- --> capitalize the b in birthday
- 310353-1
- Alexandra: Right after we were spotted on the rooftop,@scandalous rumors about us began to spread among the students...
- --> add a line break after "began"
- Teacher: Whereas adults over the age of 18 have@better judgment
- --> add a period at the end
- Alexandra: I was so angry.@He should have brought up the fact that he was getting transferred@or my recommendation to try to make me give up.
- --> add a line break after "fact"
- Alexandra: He believed that that would be the best way to ensure my happiness.@So, as if to defy Teacher's statement, I...
- --> add a line break after "be"
- Alexandra: Something this painful, yet completely out-of-bounds...@I don't want it anymore.
- --> move the line break to after "completely"
- 310353-4
- Alexandra: ...This is sudden, Teacher, but there are [textRed:certain@rumors]being circulated among everyone.
- --> add a space after "rumors]"
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