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Alexandra MSS json Review

Jun 3rd, 2021 (edited)
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  2. Alexandra: As usual,@they thought I was joking@and didn't get the message.@But I wasn't sad.
  3. --> change "they" to "he"
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  7. Everyone: "Happy birthday to youuu~♪"
  8. --> capitalize the b in birthday
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  12. Alexandra: Right after we were spotted on the rooftop,@scandalous rumors about us began to spread among the students...
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  15. Teacher: Whereas adults over the age of 18 have@better judgment
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  18. Alexandra: I was so angry.@He should have brought up the fact that he was getting transferred@or my recommendation to try to make me give up.
  19. --> add a line break after "fact"
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  21. Alexandra: He believed that that would be the best way to ensure my happiness.@So, as if to defy Teacher's statement, I...
  22. --> add a line break after "be"
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  24. Alexandra: Something this painful, yet completely out-of-bounds...@I don't want it anymore.
  25. --> move the line break to after "completely"
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  29. Alexandra: ...This is sudden, Teacher, but there are [textRed:certain@rumors]being circulated among everyone.
  30. --> add a space after "rumors]"
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