What would i do to fix TLOU2

here what i would of done differently

THIS would be an Abby Story, NO Ellie or Jackson stuff at all.

it would show that Abby is still haunted for 5 years what went down in salt lake city & can't move on. It would introduce all her friends in the settlements she at which you will learn are all Ex-firefly members. Then after a while, Abby meet an unknown contact asking if anything new has happening about a certain "person of interest" & the stranger says no & walk away. Owen, nearby overhear the conversation and ask what was all that about & Abby shrug it off saying nothing important at all.

THEN the game play out & similar to Halo Reach, you fight with your friends throughout the game & bond with them......& similar to halo reach, Literally most of them died either to Scar or Clicker. Then events similar to game play out, then reaching OWEN at the boat you guys talk. Before Abby leaves telling him to grow up, Owen retorts about her growing up, as he pieces two & two together that she Still looking for Joel and asking WLF scout member who venture off the wall for any intel when they come back, telling her she the one who hasnt grown up. Shock & NOT KNOWING what to say, Abby leaves and sleep outside. Then original plot resume to save the Scar children & it flesh out more about the culture and scars way of life through dialogue then instead of notes (which kinda suck out the tension cause I thought this MOTHER person was alive until i read one notes randomly where she was killed off screen & no one mention it).

So after saving Lez and leaving with the boat with any of the remaining survivor of the Ex-firefly to California.

2 month has past, & we see Abby now with her Hair cut off & looking better. Turn out the rumor is true and she living in the new establish firefly camp. She is walk upon by a person who give her an piece of paper & walk off. Owen who was nearby ask what was that about. Abby not needing to be nervous, tell owen that she overhead that the firefly were expanding & doing trades with other citys & learn that there an town in jackson that is lead by an man Tommy......along with his Brother Joel Miller. Owen ask what she going to do, and with no hesitation , Abby rip the paper. She says, she cant forgive joel.......but she understand him (after doing what he did to save ellie as the same with LEZ from the WLF & scar). BUT she want to "live in the now" then be stuck in the past. Owen smile, now seeing his original friend return after 5 years, and they see there friends (the ones who are remaining) at the breakfast table & walk over there to join them as the camera pans out to the overhead of the camp.

LIKE the main theme of the game was "moving on" if this was the game, i wanted Abby to move on from her GRUDGE that prevented her from being happy or having an relationship with Owen. After the events of the game, she has found peace

That all