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  1. Air Adept
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  3. Aerokinesis doesn't specify range?
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  5. Electrokinesis really needs that far of a range? Most people cap out at +10 on stat, and that's about 164 feet away.
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  7. Maybe make air slash a little more expensive, like 15 hp.
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  9. Defog maybe a little cheap? Increase to 10?
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  11. Tailwind says Target: Trainers or Pokemon, but it's a field move with no target.
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  13. Thunder Wave WAY WAY TOO CHEAP. Seriously, thunder wave is a ridculously good move, which is why it had to get nerfed to center. 10 hp is way too cheap of a cost, especially if it can be used at will.
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  15. All the ones that require "Two feats that allow you to use x element move are a bit odd considering there are only 2 other feats of that element that don't have a level requirement.
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  17. Flier is good. I like it.
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  19. Mass Levitation, a little wordy... and it doesn't work off the same mechanic flier does? It just seems to cost a flat 10 hp and then boom that's it. Is that intended?
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  21. Earth Shaker
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  23. No ground pokemon option in prereqs? Fire Breather gets Fire, Ghost, and Dark in theirs.
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  25. Incredibly OCD nitpick: it says "Class Features: Terrakinesis, Botanokinesis" but the features are in the order of botano then terrakinesis. All the other ones are in order...
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  27. Terrakinesis only works when you're concious? Actually, I never really thought of fainted stuff taking damage from sandstorm in the first place. But it seems kind of... unfortunate?
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  29. Cotton Spore and Sand Attack are really the best we can do, considering air adept gets thunder wave? Just saiyan.
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  31. Stone Edge is level 15 and Leaf Storm is level 10? I'd switch those two around. Leaf Storm is miles better than stone edge...
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  33. Speaking of leaf storm, only 20 hp cost?
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  35. Aromatherapy possibly a bit pricey. Just a thought, doesn't NEED to be changed.
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  37. By the way one of you needs to put down that thing for the burrow capability that you can tell how far from your original position you have traveled etc. because otherwise it's kind of impossible or at least incredibly unreasonable to use burrowing without terravision.
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  39. Fire Breather
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  41. Possibly specify range on photokinesis?
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  43. Incredibly minor nitpick, "A Fire Breather is both pyrokinetic and photokinetic." what about cross classing? :3c
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  45. Mirage is a WEIRD and CRAZY feat. It is a bit lacking in description of exactly what you can do, but I don't mind too much actually. Consider raising HP cost to 25 or so though.
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  47. Night Daze is very costly. It's only a single target attack with 80 power (granted that is wrong and should be changed) and it costs as much as hurricane? Bad form.
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  49. Again, make sure we put in some changes to the invisibility capability as well.
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  51. Rain Maker
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  53. "The water is very reliable for hydration and also serves to keep wounds calmed until healed." Except there's no healing feature? Or am I derping?
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  55. Really forcing an ice type pokemon as a prereq? Ice pokemon are ridiculously rare in most campaigns, so you usually have to start with one. And that can be very difficult considering how fragile they are.
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  57. Same thing about consciousness during weather as earth shaker.
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