Tayter_Kat

skiguys

Aug 3rd, 2015
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  1. Hello skiguys, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some houses, but they lack a bit of depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. It looks like you started to add depth, but it can be continues all around the house. I suggest adding stairs, fences, and slabs to make depth. If you want to add on some detail, trap doors and buttons will do that!
  5. If you deed an example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you an example and how not to do depth.
  6. Organics:
  7. This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some good trees, but some looks a bit like notch trees. I suggest making your own design instead of making them looks identical to the saplings. This will show your creativity and help improve your skills.
  8. Terrain:
  9. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Some of your plot looks a bit flat. I suggest making it looks less flat by adding more hills and craters all around your plot. This will make it more realistic.
  10. Other:
  11. This is anything I cannot fit into the previous categories. It seems like you have a good pallet for the houses, but the bridge does not match the houses. Pallet is the blocks you choose to build almost anything; they have to match or fit a theme of course I suggest making them out of the same blocks for it all to fit together.
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  13. Good Luck<3
  14. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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