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- Hello skiguys, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
- Structure:
- This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have some houses, but they lack a bit of depth. Depth is the layers within a structure. It looks like you started to add depth, but it can be continues all around the house. I suggest adding stairs, fences, and slabs to make depth. If you want to add on some detail, trap doors and buttons will do that!
- If you deed an example of depth, visit /warp depthtutorial. This shows you an example and how not to do depth.
- Organics:
- This is anything living, like trees and animals. You have some good trees, but some looks a bit like notch trees. I suggest making your own design instead of making them looks identical to the saplings. This will show your creativity and help improve your skills.
- Terrain:
- This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Some of your plot looks a bit flat. I suggest making it looks less flat by adding more hills and craters all around your plot. This will make it more realistic.
- Other:
- This is anything I cannot fit into the previous categories. It seems like you have a good pallet for the houses, but the bridge does not match the houses. Pallet is the blocks you choose to build almost anything; they have to match or fit a theme of course I suggest making them out of the same blocks for it all to fit together.
- Good Luck<3
- Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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