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- Hello OmegaWolf213!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Not mucht o say since your lacking a lot of thing son your plot. Lets get started.
- First of all, You dont have any structures on your plot. Structure is 1 of the 3 major parts of your plot that you need to rank up. The other 2 are organics and terrain. Organics is anything living such as trees, flowers, animals, statues are an exception, etc. Terrain is basically hills, mountains, rivers and any landscape added to your plot.
- Your organic in this case is the draghun. Your draghun doesnt even look like a draghun and needs a lot of work to it. I would suggest getting advice from corengames, one of the BT of the server, since he specializes in making draghuns.
- You terrain is not appealing. It's basically stone with different banes of ores. It may look colorful but it doesnt really look good. You hills would also need some work too.
- Overall, this plot shows little effort to it and needs a lot of work before it can be ranked up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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