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- Hey there!
- So first of all, a bit about your terrain. I really like the shape, and I understand it's probably the style you were going for, but the whole 'one colour' thing isn't enough - it doesn't show creativity really. I wouldn't be so strict on it if the other aspects of the plot were great, but they need some improvements too.
- The organics, the trees, are really great! Lovely shapes, very original block choice and really fits well on the plot ^.^
- The structure, however, is unusual. I can see the pb influence in the pillars, which look okay, but not with the palette of the reast of the building. As well, it's all a little repetitive. The wall could use more detailing itself and a better block choice because it doesn't go well with the pillars. And lastly, the roof - The roof seems a little too plain, like you lost the ambition to finish the build with a perfect roof. I think another section on top of this could look nice, along with a towered roof.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty :3
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