[10:27] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Heh.
[10:28] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Son of a bitch. I have IRL shit to deal with. How long will you be on? This will take some time.
[10:28] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: on and off all day no worries
[10:28] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Okay.
[11:16] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Back.
[11:26] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: hey me too
[11:27] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Cool.
[11:27] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: yea I'm pretty great
[11:27] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: ok so let's start all over
[11:27] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: haha sorry, I like the humor
[11:34] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: soooo we have a pretty good base
[11:40] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Heh, sorry, I had forgotten one thing, now I'm back, for a few hours, anyway.
[11:40] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: oh hi
[11:40] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: An IRL thing.
[11:40] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I added some images.
[11:40] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: so think of anything else or want to make any adjustments or anything
[11:40] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: oh
[11:41] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: What did you think of the name? Also, what's Patriot Star's role in this? What's known about him?
[11:41] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: oh well forgot about me lol
[11:41] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: ummm we can leave me out or I can be a male version that does things with her sometimes
[11:42] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: what was the name again?
[11:42] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Flashpoint.
[11:42] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: it could be something badge related or shield
[11:42] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: oh that can work
[11:42] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: wait no
[11:43] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: it should have Justice
[11:43] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Oh?
[11:43] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Justice Shield....Justice Angel
[11:43] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: something cute and sexy
[11:43] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Hmm....
[11:44] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Lt sexy face
[11:45] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Angel, vixen, defender, justice, star...all cool words
[11:46] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Hmm....
[11:47] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I may have not told the character page to save the changes.
[11:48] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: pics are there
[11:48] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Good.
[11:50] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Names suck.
[11:52] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: well want it to be sexy or tough or cute
[11:53] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I'm tryin' to hit all three in a single go.
[11:55] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I was about to say 'Lieutenant Angel' but.... Lieutenant Angel already exists. He's the main character of Hot Fuzz.
[11:55] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: lol
[11:55] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Major Justice
[11:56] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Patriot has another story going with a heroine named Major America
[11:56] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Armored Angel
[11:57] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I was probably gonna go as a Captain, it's popular, it's a good rank for street Justice. Captain Angel might work, but I think that's a bit cheesy. Captain Whitehat is a bit too on the nose, but 'Whitehat inc.' is the name of her private detective agency in a continuity. I have an idea, lemme google something real fast.
[11:59] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Captain Angelheart
[11:59] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Captain Angel Star
[12:02] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: always liked the anime Angel Blade
[12:02] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: [url]https://i.pinimg.com/originals/f7/56/9d/f7569d056747212d8f3964a11bc1060e.jpg[/url]
[12:02] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Heh.
[12:02] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I've seen it. I didn't want an outfit that....naked.
[12:03] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: haha
[12:06] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Captain Powers, if we're going to go for a Biblical reference, while keeping the police theme. Powers were angelic warriors, like Knights.
[12:06] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Actually, that reminds me.
[12:06] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Angel Knight
[12:06] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: that sounds cool
[12:06] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: That was what I was thinking.
[12:06] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: That or Knight Angel.
[12:06] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: Paladin Star
[12:07] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Heh, that's a bit too Brotherhood of Steel.
[12:07] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: yea i guess
[12:07] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: The group could be called The "City Knights" and my hero could be Knight Star and you Knight Angel
[12:07] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: or vice versa
[12:08] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Knight Angel works.
[12:08] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: story wise I think they work alone for the most part as they are very powerful, but together for certain missions or 2 vs 2 events
[12:08] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: If we're gonna keep up with that, her suit should have a flight pack, with stylized wings.
[12:08] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: [url=https://i.pinimg.com/originals/30/e0/96/30e09693da50aea79df90f8169cba826.jpg]Like this.[/url]
[12:09] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: yea they could have those but they are hidden unless she needs to use them
[12:10] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: it's like superheroes that get into brawls on the ground and don't remember they can fly until they are getting their ass kicked
[12:10] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: almost trying to be honorable and fight on equal footing
[12:11] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Heh, that's to create artificial stakes and I tend to not like books written like that.
[12:12] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I much rather fights like we often see in the MCU films, where the protagonist may very well nearly die half a dozen times in a fight.
[12:12] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: yea that can be fun
[12:12] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: I am a fan of fights where the heroine goes down and looks defeated or knocked out and stays there for a while
[12:13] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: even if she isn't defeated or knocked out, like takes a minute to collect her thoughts or even arch her back a bit for the crowd lol
[12:13] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: or even is knocked out for a few minutes but the bad guys don't stop the attack, just pound her KO'd body around
[12:14] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Seems like a good way to have a dead heroine.
[12:14] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: her armor can withstand it :)
[12:15] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Like being punch drunk in boxing.
[12:15] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: yea
[12:15] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: that's perfect
[12:15] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: That means it's time to hang up the towel, actually.
[12:15] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: If you get punch drunk, you are done.
[12:15] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: your career is over.
[12:15] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: well don't be a boxer
[12:16] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: but it's fun in a fight, maybe if it gets to that point in these fights she has to escape and hits a button for help or something more playful like a "throw in the towel" button that means she has admitted defeat
[12:17] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: If you become punch drunk as a super hero, your career is also over.
[12:17] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: You also may die from it anyway./
[12:18] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: well if that were the case every hero would be dead by now
[12:18] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: thank goodness it's a fantasy
[12:18] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: and they are a lot tougher than normal people and heal faster
[12:19] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: This is a fair bit meaner than I'm really interested in. It's fine if the heroes lose sometimes, but if that's gonna be the main premise of the story, I am not overly inclined to hang around. Nah, most heroes don't get KO'd that often. Like, Empowered is a book where the hero gets KO'd a lot, but her suit regenerates her brain. Even healing the damage she had from when she jumped off the stairs as a child.
[12:20] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: I think Stark's only been KO'd like.... four times in the MCU? Once was when he was blown up at the start, again at the end of his first film, once in Avengers, and maybe once in Iron Man 3, when he escaped the destruction of his house.
[12:22] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: I think you're taking what I said a bit too seriously
[12:23] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: And I feel like I have been pretty compromising so far from where I started to what we are at now, and I have a feeling it will end up being a totally different story
[12:24] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: So let's call it what it is and stop it now
[12:24] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: thanks for the time today
[12:25] [user]Tiffany Weiss[/user]: Eh, alright, I'm willing to have her fight and lose sometimes, but the kicking her while she's already unconscious is a bit.... too far. Have a nice day, sorry to waste your time.
[12:25] [user]Patriot Star[/user]: later