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R*Novice Review: bfkul

Jun 28th, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Decent plot so far, but theres some stuff i think you should work on before you can rank!
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  5. First, your terrain is decent, but try to make it blend more. I understand the concept, just try to make it flow better!
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  7. Your structures are decent, but the dont quite match the terrain. They have decent depth and detail, but they just arent the right theme, so try to keep your plot as consistent as possible :)
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  9. Same goes with your trees. They're decent, but they dont fit the theme of the terrain. Also, when doing trees, try to have a higher percentage of air in your brush so that they look fluffier and more tree-like!
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  11. Good luck!
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