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Hydrende's spark review!

Oct 26th, 2015
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  1. Hi Hydrende! I know everything is a little hard for you at the moment, so I'm not going to be lengthy or mean about the review.
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  3. So! As you probably know, plots require three things. Structure, organics and terrain.
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  5. The structure on your plot is actually pretty cool! I like the whole modern house feel, it just needs more detail. Make the walls have multiple layers of detail, and add an interior to the inside. If you did build this house in real life I do admit I would definitely live in it.
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  7. The terrain needs some work. Maybe add a hill or a dip rather than the terrain being flat, add some variety! Maybe change up the block scheme for the terrain a little too. Try using wool or clay as well as the dirt? That may just work. Maybe you could put the house on top of a hill, or have a valley next to it.
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  9. The organics also need to show through. I'd personally recommend a large tree in one corner with some smaller ones surrounding it, maybe add a posh garden with a pool by the house, something modern and sophisticated. Add some bushes and more flowers! Colour! Brightness! Happiness! Yay! :D
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  11. Well! Simple details mean a lot. Keep it up Hydrende!
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