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  1. RB: Not bad at all! I really liked the first song choice you used to parody and it really worked well with Yoshi, with some very creative lyrics thrown in the mix. Also I appreciate that your captain sang the song in the style almost perfectly of the original, even if some of the lyrics were hard to hear. The second song was also... alright. The song had some fun lyrics and nice to see Shroob get some love, although it doesn’t flow as well as the previous song did along with having some confusing lyrics, so singing it wouldn’t be a bad idea, so good work overall.
  2. FH: I don’t hate this entry, but I don’t love it either, I appreciate you stayed loyal to the original song albeit a good chunk of the lines are the same or very close to the original lines, and their is far to much repetition for my liking and doesn’t really have anything to do with Yoshi or Shroob, not bad but a bit underwhelming.
  3. CB: The flow of this entry is probably the most unnatural of the three, still it ain’t a bad entry. A lot of the lines are very creative and show off your teams spirit very well and nice to see a few members to get some spotlight, instead of Yoshi and Shroob, but I suppose it’s a fair trade off, and CF music was appreciated and nicely put together, so well done despite the time crunch at the end.
  4. Final Rankings:
  5. 1st: RB
  6. 2nd: CB
  7. 3rd: FH
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