xDraghun

GMANTUX2004 Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
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  1. Hello GMANTUX2004!!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. I like where you are going with your structures but they need a lot of detail and depth. Try to use blocks such as wood or stone slabs/stairs to add detail, and push in the walls for depth. If you still dont understand what i mean, refer to /warp depthtutorial. Your structures really dont match each other and have styles of their own; you should work on changing it and try to make it so they have the same style.
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  7. I like how you made a custom tree but try to add more than just one. Work on the roots and branches of your tree.
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  9. You terrain is pretty decent and has some really nice smoothing. I like the mountain portion and the small river but the grass portion is pretty flat and plain. Try adding more blocks like you did with teh mountain such as green clay, cobblestone, dirt, etc. That will give it variation and color.
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  11. Overall, You need to work on some things. Try to elaborate and think about the ideas I have given you and I hope your rank up to novice real soon! Good Luck and I hope you have better chances with your next submission! :D
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