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May 2nd, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. It's clear you've been through a few plots at this point, but you don't seem to be understanding what the reviews are saying cx
  4. This is an interesting plot, but again, shows no terrain skills really. You've made a floating shape with a mixture of block types. It's interesting, but it's not really structured in the way we'd usually see a plot.
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  6. You also have no organics again and little to no structure. The nether wall has okay detail and is a nice idea, but it doesn't really make much sense.
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  8. It looks to me like this is a planet in space. It's a good idea, but it's going to need more structure, like buildings, and a little better thought out terrain - maybe some more in the environment around the planet.
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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