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- Hello ItzSanti!
- My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot again! It seems that you havent changed much from when I last reviewed u. Lets start of with your structures.
- Your ship needs a lot of detail added to it. If you look at it now, it seems a little too squarish to be a ship. Work on your sail some more too.
- Your trees dont really match the sandy theme. You could also work on smoothing them down so they dont look too squarish.
- You terrain is pretty flat and plain. Try smoothing the edges of your pond as well. Add other blocks to the terrain also to add color and variation such as clay, sandstone, etc. You could also add more cactus/ sugar cane to the plot for a realistic effect.
- You plot still needs to be worked on before you can rank up. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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