Raributt

>Your days in Ponyville, while brief, were eventful.
>Ever since you appeared in Equestria, you were working.
>Your first job was at Applejack's farm.
>Even though the pay was good, you didn't want to haul apples all day.
>After a while, word got out that you could give a really good massage.
>You eventually landed a job at Lotus and Aloe's Spa, as a masseuse.
>Your week consisted of relieving the stress from ponies.
>You were constantly overworked, and they made you work till the late hours of the night.
>However, there was one mare.
>Who made you job worth it.
>Every time you heard her voice along with the bell on the door, your heart would leap.
>"Aloe, Lotus! I'm here for my usual!"
>Speak of the devil.
>Her ususual, was a soak in a hot tub, followed by a steam bath, finishing up with a massage from you.
>Only a few customers before your beloved Rarity.
>As you worked on other customers, you couldn't help but let your thoughts drift to her.
>Her beautiful curled mane.
>Her sapphire eyes.
>Her lines, that lead to her
>Absolutely.
>Perfect.
>Plot.
>Time flies as you finish up the last customer before Rarity.
>As she walks into the room, you can't help but feel your breath being taken away.
>"Anonymous, oh how nice it is to see you. I've just been so stressed out.
>You greet her, trying your best to remain level headed.
>"I know I can always come to you to help me with this sort of thing," she says while she gets on her hind legs and stares you in the face.
>U-um, thanks Rarity... Go to the table and we can get started.
>She saunters over to the table slowly, occasionally giving you a peek at her p0ny plot.
>She lays down.
>"What are you waiting for dear?
>Pull your head out of the gutter Anon! Rarity doesn't think of you like that. You think to yourself.
>You put your hands on her withers.
>Just tell me where to start.
>"I've had to stand on my hind legs a lot recently, so could you start with my midsection?"
>You bring your hands to her back, using the bottoms of your palms to loosen up the area.
>Rarity's moans of approval spur you on futher.
>You use your elbows on the small of her back.
>"Oh, Anonymous... Right there."
>You push harder, this causes her tail to twitch.
>You must be really sore there Rarity...
>Oh, you don't even know the half of it!" she says over dramatically.
>With her tail twitching, gave you a pretty good view of her plot, and little anonymous was enjoying the view.
>"Anonymous... I have an idea."
>Yes R-rarity?
>Climb on top of my back for me, would you?"
>You nervously shuffle onto her back, wondering what she could possibly be thinking.
>"Now, you should have more leverage."
>Your hopes crushed once more, you began massaging her again.
>"Lower..."
>You move your hands an inch or two down.
>"Lower." She says again.
>You're at her tail by now
>Um, Rarity... I can't go any lower without touching yo-
>"Lower, dear."
>You hesitated.
>What if you screwed up, what if you bruise her?
>"Anonymous, what are you waiting for, an invitation? Because I already said you could."
>You place your hands on her p0ny plot.
>God it's perfect.
>You have no clue how she does it, but her plot is softer than anything you've ever felt.
>You play with her cheeks, mashing them together, letting them jiggle back into place.
>You want to hit them, but that's obviously going to far.
>You have to remain somewhat professional, even around your friends.
>"Enjoying yourself, Anonymous?"
>Oh shit.
>It seems you did go too far.
>"Normally, If somepony were to touch me there, like you have, I'd bee quite angry with them...
>I-i'm sorry Rarity I don't know what got into me. You stammer.
>"I'm not done yet dear... Your fingers feel absolutely wonderful!"
>She levitates you off of her, and gets off the table. Then she places you on the table.
>Rarity? What are you doing?
>"Look Anon... I-i need this. Okay?"
>She climbs atop you, turns around, and presents her behind to you, in all it's glory.
>You certainly don't need any more incentive.
>You pull her ass closer to your face, and begin to play around with it more, occasionally giving it a light slap.
>You watch it jiggle every time you mess with it, it's mesmerizing.
>"Ngh... Dear, stop teasing me!"
>You stop messing around and spread her cheeks. You can see everything.
>You bring your tongue from the base of her tail, to the bottom of her pussy, the area already moist in anticipation.
>By now she's quivering, If only she'd let you do this earlier.
>You continue eating her p0ny pussy out, until she takes matters into her own hooves and brings it against your face and starts grinding against it.
>You get one good breath in before she completely closes the gap between her pussy and your face.
>Air. Air is not high on your basic needs, her juices, on the other hand...
>It tasted like tea, and earthly scents. Absolutely heavenly.
>You decided to experiment with her. You brought a hand up to her other hole and inserted a finger.
>"WA-HA-HAA!"
>She came, squirting more of her juices onto your face.
>After she finished cumming, she slumped down onto your chest, exhausted.
>"T-that was amazing dear..."
>She turned around to nuzzle you.
>"I don't know how to repay you... Oh! I know!"
>Money, is how she repays you. Not leaving you with a hard-on, would have been better, but now you know, that this could happen again.
>"Bye, Nony!" She chimes as she leaves.
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half assed ending is half assed (teach me your ways experienced writefags.) critique plz.