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- Novice Review:
- Nice plot, but theres some stuff to work on before ranking up!
- Your terrain, for the most part, is flat. Yes theres small hills everywhere, but at this rank, you have world edit, so we expect you to be a bit more creative with your terrain.
- If youre unsure of how to use world edit for terrain, you can ask a mod and they'll do their best to help you :)
- Your structures are okay, but theyre very small for the size of the plot, and they generally lack detailing and depth. Use stairs, slabs, fences, walls or even buttons to detail your build appropriately. Try to make more layers in your builds, to give them a sense of deepness and depth! This makes the build more attractive to observers!
- The organics on the plot are okay. I like your willow tree, even though it is a bit small! Try to make bigger ones to give more variation to the plot! The spruce one is a bit too big around the trunk, and the leaves not big enough. Make sure the leaves to trunk ratio is balanced! I would suggest looking up trees in google and getting inspiration from there!
- Lastly, theres a bunch of empty space on the plot, so fill it all up to the best if your ability!
- I hope this helps! Good luck!
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