Babysitter V0.2.1 Feedback

Bugs:

Just one:
After they fall asleep and we get the message: "Just dreams of Christine.", then a black screen with a red message "Image 'Day30' not found."

Typos:

"You lay in bed with Christine, looking at her as she sleeps." I suppose it should be:
"You lay yourself in bed with Christine, looking at her as she sleeps." or
"You lie down in bed with Christine, looking at her as she sleeps."

"You made me chase for you. Thirst for you." I suppose it should be:
"You made me chase for you. Thirsty for you."

"I think this place only has only one bedroom...." I suppose it should be:
"I think this place has only one bedroom...."

"Narcisstic, much?" I suppose it should be:
"Narcissistic, much?"

Pictures:
Great most of the time, some pics were not that good.

Animations:
Most animations were very good, some were not so good for using lower quality pictures.

Dialogues:
They made sense most of the time. I think Christine's concern about her mom's plans is a bit exaggerated. I give more details at the end of my comments.


Comments:

I see this game divided in two parts, the first one where the player should build up the MC's relationship with Christine. He/she should not be too eager or too bold otherwise 'game over'. It is the game phase where the player should be able to control his/her lust. The second part of the game is when the main characters relationship is established, it is supposed to be the game phase where the player can reap the rewards, where the player can indulge in his/her lust.
Since the topic of the game is the romantic relationship between the MC and Christine, the last part of it should be filled with sexual action between the two main characters. It is a nonsense to spend a lot of time and effort on secondary characters at this stage of the game.
It is not the time to just say: "They had sex all day long." It should be presented as interactive events, so the players can fully enjoy those long-awaited moments.

Babysitter V.0.2.1 starts like this:

They talk, they go to bed and... nothing happens.

Later:
Christine turns around, playfully showing off her bare bottom. And the player cannot see it!? You gotta be kidding!

Then we have a very good sex scene between the two main characters! It was not perfect because the player was not given the choice to finish it inside or outside, and this option should always be there.
This is the only sex scene between the main characters in this update. I'm sure too much effort was put somewhere else, not on the topic of the game (The romantic relationship between the MC and Christine)

There is another concern, the sexy events between the main characters seem downgraded at this stage of the game, it should be the opposite!
One example:
The MC is in the hot springs with Christine, Monica and Jessica, he has a chance to touch Christine's ass surreptitiously. The players are presented with some pictures of the MC's hand on Christine's butt and then fingering her pussy. No animation, no interaction. If we compare this event with those in the first part of the game such as:

Day 5 when the MC feels Christine's body while she's asleep.
Day 6 when the MC rubs lotion on Christine's body.
Day 8 when the MC feels Christine's body when she fell asleep on the couch.
Day 9 when the MC rubs his cock against Christine's body when they're in bed at the hotel.

The difference is blatant. A lot of effort was put on creating those events and they were highly enjoyable by the players, but now the events between the main characters seem rushed. No options, no animations. It looks like the main characters of the game are not the focus of the game plot anymore.

One example to show how the hot springs event could have been to be on par with prior events involving the main characters:
- The MC has a chance to touch Christine's ass surreptitiously. Options (1-Rub it. 2-Don't rub it.)
- If he rubs it, an animation is presented. Options
(1-Keep rubbing it. 2-Squeeze it.)
- Decision made, an animation is presented. New options (1-Massage her pussy. 2-Massage her anus.)
- Decision, an animation is presented. More options (1-Finger her pussy. 2-Finger her anus.)
- Decision made, an animation is presented. The event ends.


Storywise, I don't see why Christine gets so upset and nervous about her mom's plans to move closer and bring her home again. She can easily get out of this situation. For instance:
Christine - "Mom, moving out was all about my freedom. I'm not living at home again, it won't happen!"
Monica - "So you prefer to impose yourself on your uncle. You think this is right!"
MC - "Christine is not a burden. You can stay with me as long as you wish sweetheart!"
Christine - "You see, Mom? It's all sorted out. If you want company, someone to talk to, make a trip with your good friend who provided the voucher, or better yet, get a boyfriend."


I give this update a 7 out of 10, a good update!


Typos from prior versions still present:

"and she immediately falls a sleep with all the lights on..."
"and she immediately falls asleep with all the lights on..."

"Damn! she took of her panties and didn't put them back... God help me..."
"Damn! she took off her panties and didn't put them back... God help me..."

"You were mesmerized by the that innocent cute look of her shaved pussy"
"You were mesmerized by the innocent cute look of her shaved pussy" or
"You were mesmerized by that innocent cute look of her shaved pussy"

*Damn! I wonder is she's still virgin...*
*Damn! I wonder if she's still virgin...*

"After a couple of minutes when the your adrenaline level has dropped you fall a sleep too."
"After a couple of minutes when your adrenaline level has dropped you fall asleep too."

*Even if no one ever found out? No, that's just wrong. Can't think of him like that...*
*What if no one ever found out? No, that's just wrong. Can't think of him like that...*

Christine looks over at Robert ahd Jessica.
Christine looks over at Robert and Jessica.

"I don't know... we have to work tommorrow..."
"I don't know... we have to work tomorrow..."

"I like the idea Jess, but I'd be more comforable if it was just the three of us."
"I like the idea Jess, but I'd be more comfortable if it was just the three of us."

"Well, I can't say I'm comforable with Jessica's hypotheticals, but I'm in if you are Christine."
"Well, I can't say I'm comfortable with Jessica's hypotheticals, but I'm in if you are Christine."

"she could wake up with some guy rubbing himself or her or even worse!"
"she could wake up with some guy rubbing himself on her or even worse!"

"Stop it. So Kenny was coming over to bring be some weed to try. I let him in..."
"Stop it. So Kenny was coming over to bring me some weed to try. I let him in..."

Christine tries t accomodate you as you press yourself in deeper
Christine tries to accommodate you as you press yourself in deeper

"You really love that thing, keep wearing it and I'll think you're tryingto give your uncle a heart attack"
"You really love that thing, keep wearing it and I'll think you're trying to give your uncle a heart attack"