ngmiller1 Plot Review

Hello ngmiller1!

I, xDraghun, have come back to review your next submission. Im going to make this review short and simple for you. Let's start with your structure.

You structure is pretty nice and a good sized based on how much space you have. It shows some decent depth but could use some more detailing.

Your dragon is really awesome and reminds me of Dragonball Z. It really flows well which is hard for so people to do. You could smooth it a little more thou. :DDD Your trees could use some work though. Try to make the trunk look better, and next time add some roots/branches for a more realistic feel.

You terrain has some nice variation with the different blocks but the slime blocks dont really looks good with the other blocks. I like the the river and how it is made of glass plus the sand/sandstone bottom. I also love how your bottom layer is complimented with teh andesite and cobblestone. The cave is a nice touch aswell. The arch is good but there may be a little too many vines.

Overall, Your plot seems like you put a lot of effort into it, but you may wanna change and work on some things.
Therefore, I am ranking you up to Novice. Congratulations and I hope I can see your creations in the future. ./warp novice, ./plot auto