Tonari no Chichiou-sama Gomaku

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1: Geez, you’re such a worrywart, Artoria.
2: I can go shopping by myself, you know? // I know I’ve been recuperating, but I’m all better now, so you don’t have to worry anymore.
3: No, Shirou. Even if you weren’t recuperating from anything, // it’s my job to watch over the children I care for.
4: Look, see? You aren’t healthy enough to even keep up with my walking pace.
5: Urgh... Yeah, you got me. // I still think you go a little overboard, though.

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1: But...
2: thanks for, um... today... // Artoria.
3: Of course, // Shirou.
4: We’re home.
5: Don’t forget to wash your hands and rinse your mouth now that we’re home, Shirou.
6: I know~ I’ll go use the bathroom real quick.

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1: There’s still someone in the bathroom right now...! // Wait, Shirou!
2: Oh, you’re back, Shirou.
3: Sorry, I was borrowing your shower.
4: Ahh... Ahh...!
5: I-I’m sorry, Alter!
6: I-I didn’t know you were washing up in there, I didn’t mean to barge in on you!
7: What’s wrong, Shirou? Your face is all red.
8: Hmm?
9: Uwaaah!!

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1: Stop right there, Alter!!
2: Hmm? What’s wrong, Artoria?
3: How dare you use the bathroom without asking Shirou for permission! // Know your place, Alter!
4: What are you talking about? I just apologized to him.
5: What are you saying?! There is a rightful order to all things!
6: You should have locked the door in the first place, then none of this would have happened!
7: But despite that, you...!
8: Oh, I see, I see... // Our faces are the same, our naked bodies are the same...
9: so you feel extremely jealous having Shirou see me like this.
10: W-What are you...?!

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1: Let’s not forget about how much of a tyrant you’re acting like despite being a guest to this house!
2: U-Um...
3: H-Hey, you two...
4: Well excuse me, other me. // I had no idea that a king of all people would get so exasperated over having their master see a guest’s naked body. Please forgive me.
5: Oho...
6: What’s the matter? Did I touch a nerve, Artoria?
7: Alter... Is that all you have to say?
8: Shall we find out which one of us is more worthy // to be a king once and for all right now...?
9: What a coincidence, I was thinking the same thing.
10: The King of Storms and the Lion King, which of them is the stronger king? // The best way to find out is for us to fight to the death!
11: P-Please stop, you two!

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1: Y-You two have the same face, you shouldn’t be fighting!
2: You’re one to talk, Shirou!
3: Why?!
4: You’re late, the three of you! // We’re already ready to eat~
5: Thanks for helping out with that, Ritsuka-onee-chan.
6: Let’s get back on track... // Now, then...
7: Thanks for the meal!

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1: Huh?! // The threat hasn’t passed, yet?!
2: The two of you will be staying here?! // What’s going on?!
3: Well, the whole reason we Rayshifted over here // was to recover the fragment of the Holy Grail embedded inside Shirou-kun.
4: Right now the two of you are able to resonate with Avalon, which is what’s holding it back it’s power from overflowing. // Now that we have some leeway, we should take that chance to do something about it.
5: The threat of the singularity inside him still remains.
6: I see. // So we need to remove the cause of all of this.
7: That’s right. // Our mission is to watch over the threat inside Shirou-kun until we take care of it, but...
8: until Chaldea contacts us and tells us how exactly we can take it out of him, we need to find somewhere that can be our base of operations. // Would you happen to know a good spot for that...?

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1: In that case, you can just stay over at our place for a bit.
2: A-Are you sure about that, Shirou?
3: Yeah, it’s fine. I’m sure the old man would have said the same thing if he were here.
4: Huh?!
5: Are you sure, Shirou-kun?!
6: Yeah. I don’t really completely get what’s going on, but... // it seems like you guys saved my life.
7: Oh, I better tell Fuji-nee about this so it doesn’t look too suspicious.
8: ...I see. Well if Shirou is fine with it, then I have no objections. // We’ll let Taiga know about this later.
9: Thank you, Shirou-kun! // I promise I’ll take that thing out of you and cure you!
10: I’m going to step out for a bit, Shirou. // I’m just going to do a little shopping, so I believe I’ll be back soon.
11: All right, I’ll be watching over the house, take care!
12: Thank you, Shirou.

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1: Now that I think about... it’s been a while since I’ve been able to relax like this.
2: All kinds of things happened this summer... Maybe after this is all over, I’ll take care of my homework. Then I’ll...
3: Hey, Shirou.
4: I made some tea for you. It’s cold, so I’m sure it’ll be refreshing.
5: Oh, thanks, Alter. // You can leave it right there-
6: Huh?!
7: W-What’s with that getup?!
8: Fufu, I knew you might have been a bit surprised over this.

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1: Well, since we’re going to be here for a while, Master and I decided that we should find some employment.
2: I-I see... // Where are you working at?
3: I’ll be working at a cafe in Shinto. It’s a very refined and relaxing cafe.
4: O-Oh, that’s cool...
5: B-But I gotta say... // t-that’s a really mature outfit you have on.
6: The way she’s staring at me is reminding me of something...
7: Fufu, you think so too, Shirou?
8: But this isn’t my official maid outfit.
9: (bottom right) I’m getting the same feeling as when Artoria had her switch flipped on...
10: Huh? What do you mean by that...?
11: This outfit is for your sake, Shirou.
12: Mm?!

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1: A-Alter, wait!
2: Shirou... // What did you think when you saw me in the bathroom?
3: W-What do you mean? // Hyaah!
4: I’m asking you if you felt excited from seeing my body.
5: Ah...!
6: I... did... When I saw your... naked... body...
7: and your big boobs and big butt... // I got really excited...!
8: That’s why... you probably shouldn’t...
9: Fufu, well said.
10: I shall grant you a reward.

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1: Mmm ♥
2: Mm ♥ // Nbuh ♥
3: Mmm ♥
4: Mmm ♥
5: Pwah ♥ // How was my kiss?
6: Her kiss... felt so good...
7: W-Wait, Alter! Alteeer!
8: You spend ever night with Artoria, yet it appears that you’re still not very used to the body of a female.
9: I... can’t move... I can’t... fight back...
10: I-I mean, it’s not like I’m supposed to get used to that!
11: Fufu... Well then, I suppose it’s time for me to act like a proper maid,
12: and provide some service to my master ♥

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1: suck ♥
2: Mm ♥
3: Hafu ♥ // It’s good... ♥
4: Nbuh ♥ // Nmh ♥
5: Fuu... ♥
6: Ah... Ah...!
7: She has such a calm expression on her face, but she’s using her mouth in such an intense way...!
8: Mm ♥
9: Mmm ♥
10: Mm ♥ (left of 7)
11: Her mouth’s wet insides are wrapping around my dick... // It feels way different from how Artoria does it...!
12: (below 11) Mmmm ♥
13: (left of 10) Urgh ♥
14: (below 13) Mm ♥
15: (left of 13) You’re... going at it so hard...! // I-I’m going to cum...!
16: (below 14) Mmm ♥
17: Mmmm ♥
18: I’m cummiiiiing!

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1: Ahhhh!!
2: Oh... Ah! ♥ // I’m... cumming ♥
3: Haah ♥
4: Npah ♥ // That was some very lively semen, Shirou.
5: Haah ♥
6: It was so sticky inside Alter’s mouth... It felt like it was going to take off my entire dick...
7: Fufu, your face is telling me that you’re not done expelling your lust yet.
8: Huh?! No, it’s not!
9: This time I’ll pleasure with these luscious breasts that you love so much. // You do like that kind of thing right? Titfucking, that is. ♥
10: Auu...

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1: Uuuu... // Hau ♥
2: Fufu, you’re already trembling just from me sandwiching it inside these. // Your reactions are so cute, Shirou.
3: (top left of 2) Haha ♥
4: (left of 3) It’s getting so hard between my breasts ♥
5: (below 3) This is... Haah, haah... ♥ // Ah! ♥
6: (below 5) Fufu ♥ // Then how about this? ♥
7: (right of 6) Your plump, soft breasts are... // Augh!
8: T-The way your breasts are squishing against my cock is...!

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1: So what do you think of my titfuck?
2: Ahh... ♥ Haah... Kuh ♥
3: Hah!
4: I’m only like this now because I was at your complete mercy when I was inside your body. // At this point, I’m having even more trouble holding back my feelings than Artoria does.
5: E-Even so...
6: Ah!
7: Nnah! // A-Alter...!
8: Ahhhh! Alter! ♥ // Get away, I’m going to...! ♥
9: Mm! ♥
10: I’m going to cum between // your breasts...!!
11: Mmm! ♥

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1: Fuu... ♥
2: Fuu... ♥ It’s your second time in a row, yet your load is still so thick... ♥
3: Fuu... ♥
4: You let out so much semen onto my breasts... // I’m glad to see you liked them so much.
5: Haah... Haah... Alter...!
6: Fuu... ♥
7: Fuu... ♥
8: Now I’ll use my maid pussy to eat up your dick. // You’re young, so I’m sure you still have some more stored up in there, right? ♥
9: Y-You’ve been being ridiculous, Alter!
10: Mmm! ♥
11: Haah ♥ Ahh... ♥

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1: Ahh! // Alter...! ♥
2: Nnah ♥
3: Ahh! This is...! Shirou’s dick...! ♥ // It feels so good!
4: Mmm! ♥
5: Ah! ♥ ♥
6: Ah! ♥ ♥
7: Just let me do the work today ♥ // I’ll make you feel good until my lust runs out ♥
8: Ahh... Alter!
9: Ah! ♥ ♥
10: Ahn ♥
11: Ahh... Our compatbility as sword and sheath truly is amazing! ♥
12: Nnah ♥
13: Alter looks like she’s feeling so good as she’s moving in a trance right in front of me...

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1: Ah! ♥ ♥
2: Mmm! ♥
3: Ah! ♥ ♥
4: Y-You’re shaking your hips too much, Alter! // If you move it that much, I’ll...!
5: Haah... Haah... // A-Alter...!
6: I’m going to cum! I’m going to cum again!
7: Fufu... ♥ Be more specific, Shirou. // What exactly is going to come?
8: Mmm ♥
9: Uuuu...
10: (left of 9) Answer my question, Shirou ♥
11: Mmm ♥ (above 10)
12: (below 10) Ahh... The white stuff... // The white stuff from my dick is going to cum into your pussy...!
13: (left of 11) Well said. // I’ll allow you to cum as much as you’d like... ♥
14: Cum inside my pussy, Shirou.

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1: A... Alter! ♥
2: Kuuh! ♥ ♥
3: Mmm ♥ (below 1)
4: You’re amazing, Shirou. // You came so much, yet you’re still so hard... ♥
5: Haah ♥
6: Now it’s your turn to move to your liking, Shirou ♥
7: ... // ...All right...

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1: Nnah ♥
2: My head is going blank...
3: (left of 2) Shirou! ♥
4: That’s it.. Good...! ♥
5: Mmm! ♥
6: Ahh, Shirou ♥ // You’re amazing! ♥
7: (below 2) Nnah ♥
8: Mmm! ♥
9: As the room filled with the scent of Alter’s love juice mixed together with sweat along with the summer heat... // I threw my hips against Alter again and again in a daze...
10: Ahn! ♥
11: Alter had a complicated expression on her face, a mix of pride and shamefulness.
12: More, Shirou... ♥
13: Mmm ♥
14: Ah! ♥ ♥
15: Keep... ♥ // moving ♥
16: A-All right...
17: I-It’s squeezing onto my dick...
18: She kept calling out my name with such a sweet voice. // Does this mean she wants me as a man...?

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1: Alter sought after me on nearly the same level as Artoria did, but...
2: Ahn! ♥ (left of 1)
3: (below 1) Alter... // Alter!
4: Nnah ♥
5: Fill my vulgar maid pussy up // with your steaming hot sperm ♥
6: Mmm! ♥
7: if I’m this sought after while I’m still recuperating...
8: Nnah ♥
9: Ahhh ♥
10: Shirou, you’re amazing...! ♥
11: Alter...! I’m... // going to cum in your pussy again...!
12: Ahh... ♥ Shirou...! ♥ // Do it... Shoot it all the way inside! ♥ ♥

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1: Nhaah ♥ Ahh...! ♥
2: Haaah ♥ Ah! Ahhhh! ♥
3: It had nothing to do with providing service as a maid anymore, Alter pretty much just squeezed me completely dry.
4: Fuu... ♥
5: Fuu... ♥
6: Haah... Haah... Thanks for the meal... ♥ // That was truly a wonderful session you treated me to... ♥ // You felt good too right, Shirou?
7: Y-Yeah...
8: I was surprised myself at how many times I came to Alter...

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1: Well... // this was the first time I’ve ever gone that far in sex before...
2: I think.. I’m at my limit...
3: Hmm...? What’s wrong, Shirou...? Huh? Shirou...?
4: O-Oh no... Even though I’m a Heroic Spirit, I accidentally got caught up in the moment and... // Hey! Wake up, Shirou!
5: Alter...
6: Stealing a bite while I’m not here, I see... // That’s quite bold of you. Would you mind explaining yourself, Alter...?
7: D-Did I do something wrong...?
8: How dare you have the nerve to say that while you’re dressed up like that?!
9: I then spent the rest of my summer vacation // in the lingering summer heat as Artoria and the rest took care of my sickness.

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I wanted to do it with Shirou too, you know...

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Front cover rough sketch.
Lancer Alter covers up most of it, but I actually worked really hard drawing the Emiya residence background.

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Lancer Alter maid concept designs.
I used FGO’s Maid Alter as a base, but it was hard for me to use the Maid Saber design from Hollow.
If I ever have a scene showing her working at the cafe in Shinto, then maybe I’ll use one of these designs.

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I’ll be doing a FGO collab doujin with Yamoge-san (@yamoges) for summer Comiket with the Chaldea Master and Chichiou in a sports swimsuit.
Check it out if you happen to see it.