xDraghun

Squirrelax Plot Review

Jul 21st, 2015
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  1. Hello Squirrelax!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start of with your structure.
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  5. Your structure is lacking depth and detail. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. i would like u to make another structure based on how much extra space you have.It's a little weird how the dock is leveled with the ground level of the terrain. Ur dock is also a little but plain since its only one block. It also lacks detail.
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  7. Your tree is nice especially since it's custom made, but it looks a little blocky. try to smooth it down some more. You might wanna also add more trees based an all ur extra space.
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  9. Your terrain is decent but has some flaws. Your mountain looks too triangular. I like how you added different blocks for the stone portion. You might wanna change the ground underwater, so it isnt just grass.
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  11. Overall, I Think your plot could still use a lot of work before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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