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- Hello vTrippy!
- My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot. Lets start of with your structure.
- Your structure is pretty nice for initiate and it fits nice and compactly with the things around your plot. I like your detail but try not to make it so repetitive. Mix it up a bit. Your roof is a little weird how it gives the impression of it sinking into the structure so u might have to work on that. Your depth is pretty decent and goes well with your choice of detail.
- Next time, I would like to see more organics from you. The organics that are on your plot is one tree. Try adding more than one even if its the same tree. I like the detail and effort you put into your tree especially adding the apples and roots. Next time you should try to take it a step furthur and add branches to your tree, and add some air holes so it gives it a realistic feel.
- Your terrain is pretty nice and settle. Try to advance into practicing small mountains which could highly improve your terrain. Your small hills are pretty nice based on other initiate plots and i like how u add more than one so the ground wouldn't be as flat. Next time you should experiment with using different blocks to add detail and variation to your terrain so it isn't just default grass which adds flatness. The small farm with the water current adds variation because of the hills on the other sides it makes the hills not seem less repetitive. Your additions are also nicely included such as the haybales, wood logs,and water well.
- I have decided that I am going to rank you to novice due to the effort you have shown. Just keep in mind, I want to see more organics and a nicer terrain in your novice plot. Good Job and to start your novice plot, type ./warp novice then ./plot auto. :DDD
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